christine king Posted June 28, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 2 hours ago, Ludub said: Hmm, interesting. While I can sympathise with Brody to some extent, I think Tori's being very unfair to Justin. What makes Brody's feelings for Phoebe more important than Justin's? Why is she opening this can of worms and stirring up trouble? Sad that Brody has been so scarred by his previous experience that he's been too frightened to start a relationship with anyone else. Quite an admission. At least he recognises it though. Again, your dialogue just flows so well! Really well written! Looking forward to the next chapter x Tori hasn't taken sides she was just offering her opinion. Thank you. 1 hour ago, Kristen said: Brody has feelings for Phoebe? I almost forgot about that. The story is about that. 46 minutes ago, sallyandflynnfan said: Love it. It a amazing fanfiction Brody needs to hurry up and tell Phoebe he likes her He will in time keep reading. Thanks for reading guys I'll try to get the next chapter up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 Doesn't Tori know the number one rule you can't break the bro code Her family will end up hating each other haha that's what I think and then Tori will be the one who is blamed Brody getting dumped by his girlfriend sucks but getting on the wrong side of his brother and trying to take his girl isn't cool I can't help but feel sorry for Justin here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 12 hours ago, pembie said: Doesn't Tori know the number one rule you can't break the bro code Her family will end up hating each other haha that's what I think and then Tori will be the one who is blamed Brody getting dumped by his girlfriend sucks but getting on the wrong side of his brother and trying to take his girl isn't cool I can't help but feel sorry for Justin here. Hmm interesting. Thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Great chapter Liked the interactions between the characters Update soon please xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 7 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Liked the interactions between the characters Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted July 6, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 Hey sorry guys for the delay but I hope you enjoy this next chapter. Chapter 8: The Morgan's Brody and Tori arrive back with the chinese Mason: yes!! Justin: finally!! Phoebe: we were wondering why you guys took forever Tori: it was like a hour and 15 minutes Brody: yeah not much longer then we said Justin: so it was busy? Tori: yeah a bit Raffy: did you get the porncrackers? Tori: of course Brody throws her the bag Raffy: thanks Brody: hey I better get some Raffy: nah, I'm eating them all Justin: do I get one then? Raffy: nope Mason: what about me? Raffy: no way, you'd eat the whole packet! Mason: liar! Tori: what about me? I paid for them Raffy: yeah I'll share with you Tori: ha, I win! Sucked in boys Justin: now I'll just steal them from yeah Tori: you and what army? Mason: this army? Brody and Justin hold her Brody: got ya! Tori: ok I surrender we can all eat them chill out! Raffy: yeah I was just joking anyway as if I wouldn't share Phoebe: ok how about we get to eating? Justin: done Later that Night Phoebe finds Brody outside Phoebe: hey Brody: hey Phoebe: you couldn't sleep either? Brody: I have a lot on my mind Phoebe: me too Brody: oh yeah sorry.. how's Justin? Phoebe: still in the bad books Brody: you will sort it out? Phoebe: you think? Brody: if you both want too.. then yeah Phoebe: maybe.. I don't know anymore Brody: is it Ava? Phoebe: no, why would you think that? Brody: I was just wondering Phoebe: no it's.. Tori comes out and interrupts them Tori: hey Phoebe and Brody: hey Tori: what are you guys doing out here? Brody: just chatting Tori: I heard voices and thought I'd investigate Brody: oh look you found us Tori: haha, funny Brody: any way I'm going to go to bed Tori and Phoebe: night Brody: night Brody leaves Tori: so what's up with you? Phoebe: just Justin Tori: if it's just Justin.. then why are you so weird with Brody? Phoebe: what? That's not.. I'm not.. Tori: woah.. I didn't mean to freak you out Phlebe: you didn't, I was just caught off gaurd Tori: clearly.. but I'm here if you need to talk about anything.. Phoebe: yeah their is something... Tori: then spill... Phoebe: ok promise you won't tell Justin? Tori: I promise Phoebe: well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted July 6, 2017 Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 Is the thing Phoeobe doesn't want Justin to is that she's got really stinky pawn cracker breath? No it seems that her and Justin might be coming to a end which is quite sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 6, 2017 Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 So what was Phoebe going to tell Brody?Looks like Tori might be about to find out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted July 6, 2017 Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 Great chapter Really intrigued about what Brody is going to tell Phoebe And looks like Tori is gonna find out Update soon please xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 7, 2017 Report Share Posted July 7, 2017 Great chapter Wonder what Brody was about to tell Phoebe Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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