Sabrina Posted June 10, 2013 Report Share Posted June 10, 2013 Chapter 2 - Poor Charlie. I loved the camping scenes. Chapter 3 - I loved Charlie and Grace going shopping. Chapter 4 - I hope Brax gets the job. Chapter 5 - I wonder how Heath will react to Brax being in the Bay. Grace is adorable. Chapter 6 - I can't believe Heath twisted the story. Chapter 7 - That was so sad when Charlie told Brax about Angelo. Chapter 8 - Poor Charlie. Grace was so cute not wanting Ruby to go. I hope Charlie and Brax do eventually go for that drink. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted June 10, 2013 Report Share Posted June 10, 2013 Just read this from the beginning and am loving it! Your writing is beautiful and makes me want to keep reading Please update soon Lisa x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spotd1 Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 Another great chapter Danni! Poor Grace her little heart was breaking when Ruby left! I love that Brax said he'd date Charlie! I so wanted her to say yes but obviously the time's not right! Can't wait to see how it all pans out! XX Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 (edited) Great chapter Hehehe Grace and Lucy were so cute Update soon xx Edited June 12, 2013 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beebee Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 OMG how rude was Heath ... seriously what a jerk!! Was wondering how it was going to come out that Heath had told everyone that Brax had slept with his fiance ... liked how it did Come out awesome update .. x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spotd1 Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 ARGHHHH Heath! I think beebee and I can take him out..if you want to write us in to your story bahaha just joking loved that Charlie ran into Brax right after and he was able to tell her the truth! Heath deserves what he gets from now on! Can't wait for the next chapter! Great writing once again Danni! Xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 (edited) Great chapter. Oops I am so sorry, Danni! My mistake, lol! I did re-edit my previous post to delete out the 'Charlie and Brax's date part'Just thought they are having a date. I must had mis-read the previous chapter. Lol. Sorry won't happen again. Awww loved the Xavier and Ruby parts-so cute. Update soon xx Edited June 12, 2013 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spotd1 Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 LOL poor Xav..thought he was helping! Glad Charlie and Brax are going to test cocktails out..together! Can't wait! Xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 Loved the last few chapters I really hope Charlie can give Brax a chance, it would be nice to see her happy and slightly moving on! Hope Ruby settles in Uni! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakie42 Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 Great chapter. Looking forward to this cocktail not-a-date date! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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