beebee Posted June 15, 2013 Report Share Posted June 15, 2013 Loved this ... especially when Charlie was patching Brax up ... They was sweet Not to sound mean but I'm totally Chax obsessed so forgive me if I don't comment much on Any of the Rubes/Xav stuff ... Can't wait for more x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakie42 Posted June 15, 2013 Report Share Posted June 15, 2013 (edited) I get that Charlie wasn't too impressed with Brax, maybe it would have been better if he had given Heath the chance to tell her himself. The ending of that part was so sweet Also really loving the Ruby stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter! Edited June 15, 2013 by Freakie42 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spotd1 Posted June 15, 2013 Report Share Posted June 15, 2013 Naughty boy Brax! But he is right, Bianca has a right to know! Love that Charlie helped clean him up! BUT I must say I loved that she got a funny feeling in the pit of her stomach more! Is it wrong that I want to shake Ruby? Xavier is so nice...and she promised him she wouldn't touch another joint! Really enjoying this story Danni! Great writing, as always! Xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoRo90 Posted June 15, 2013 Report Share Posted June 15, 2013 Hy Danni sorry I haven't been commenting but life as been hectic, I have been doing my best to keep up when I can and every chapter so far as been great Love Grace's shyness, she just seems incredibly cute and couldn't not believe Heath lied about Brax being the one to sleep with his fiancee, but still glad Brax wasn't the one doing the cheating I love how you're taking things slowly with Chax, it's very realistic and I love that you show that they are attracted to each other ... love the way Charlies feeling are building towards Brax just hope Ruby doesn't protest to it. And while on the subject of Ruby wow ... I'm shocked at the extent she is going to, just to make friends and cant believe she almost kissed that guy. Really hope she wakes up to herself soon and see's that what she could lose isn't worth the friends she so desperately wants to make. All in All I'm loving every bit of it cant wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beebee Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 No Chax ? Lol was cracking up when Grace called Heath an idiot ... CLASSIC !! A little unsure of the whole Rubes & Xav situation great update x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 Great chapter Haha cracked up when Grace called Heath an idiot! Awesome writing, Danni! Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spotd1 Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 Another great chapter Danni! Loved Grace calling Brax, Bax she's adorable! She is also very wise..Heath is an idiot bahaha can't wait for Charlie to tell Brax..I hope she does! I feel sorry for Xav..hope Rubes turns up to the cinema! Can't wait for the next chapter! Xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakie42 Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 So addicted to this fanfic once again, can't wait for your next chapter!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Awesome chapter!! Loved it!! Loved Chax spending sometime together and having cocktails together. Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beebee Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Love how Charlie feels that she can talk to Brax ... nawwww so was hoping he kissed her lol awesome Awesome chapter ... loved it xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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