Freakie42 Posted March 23, 2012 Report Posted March 23, 2012 It would be so unfair if Brax gets in trouble for assault.. Great chapter, update soon! Quote
caroline77 Posted March 23, 2012 Report Posted March 23, 2012 When I read that Ryan was hassling Charlie I thought oh no. I am glad that John rescued her. If they decide to go to the police at least Johns evedence that Ryan has been seen lurking around Charlie and Braxs house in a suspicous manner will go in Braxs favour. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Quote
beebee Posted March 24, 2012 Report Posted March 24, 2012 Great update :-) Cannot believe the hide of Ryan what a jerk!! Glad that Charlie has decided to go to the police ... Praying that Brax doesn't get in trouble surely not !! Riley ... seriously love that kid, she is so damn cute! When she ran up & pushed Ryan ... I was thinking you are more like your dad then I first thought lol Can't wait for more xxx Quote
mizziette Posted March 25, 2012 Report Posted March 25, 2012 Is Ruby getting a little pregnant? Sounds like it. Fan fic kids are always just too adorable. Loved mother and daughter time with Paige. Glad Charlie has some sort of distraction from her mind with her babies. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 25, 2012 Report Posted March 25, 2012 Great chapter Liked Charlie spending the day with her kids. Ohhh at the end-Ruby may be pregnant...? More soon please xx Quote
soph1303 Posted March 25, 2012 Author Report Posted March 25, 2012 Great update, So glad that Charlie told the police what happened, and that John will act as a witness if necessary !! Loved how you referenced to the fact that despite the fact that their twins, Paige is a mini-Charlie and Riley is a mini-Brax !!! Riley and paige were both so damn adorable in their own idividual ways in that update !!! Definitely thinking that ruby's pregnant !! I was kinda surprised that neither of them thought that her being sick could be an indicator of ruby being pregnant, especially seeing as I thought they were supposed to be trying for a baby. More soon please Quote
beebee Posted March 25, 2012 Report Posted March 25, 2012 (edited) Jacob, Riley & Paige are all seriously too cute!! Love them lol You write their characters brilliantly ... Just want to read more :-) Was seriously cracking up when Riley told Brax to move his butt LMAO!! I can't wait for more ..... Please update soon xxx Edited March 25, 2012 by beebee Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 25, 2012 Report Posted March 25, 2012 Loved Riley calling John "Mr.John" and Paige was really cute with Charlie, nice that she tried going in the water for a bit.Looks like Xavier and Ruby's trying for a baby has worked! Quote
totally Posted March 25, 2012 Report Posted March 25, 2012 (edited) That was so sweet! Paige seems lovely, and riley is just plain crazy. As Brax said in one of your previous updates... it wouldn't be fair to anyone else if they kept making such great babies! Charlie smiling at her family was so sweet. I hope she can find the strength in her family to get through these hard times. I love how you write their 'family time', so great to read. Am I the only one who is hoping Ruby is not pregnant? I don't want Charlie to be a grandmother just yet, she is still so young. Edited March 25, 2012 by totally Quote
~Zoe~ Posted March 25, 2012 Report Posted March 25, 2012 Think Ruby & Xav are about to become parents as like everyone else said, looks like shes pregnant! Great update. Quote
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