Inactive User Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 (edited) Awesome chapter Glad Chax sorted things out! The part with Brax giving Charlie the ring and sharing a kiss-so cute! Now hope they will tell Ryan to back off! Awww the girls riding-so cute! More soon pleaseee xx, Danni Edited March 7, 2012 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
Dingo x Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 Brilliant chapters. Hate Ryan so much, so glad that Chax have sorted stuff out (: Looking forward to more. xx Quote
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 Glad chax talked it out properly and are happy nawww riley and paige! So cute!! Thanks for 2 updates in 1 day danni, amazing!! And wedding talk is awesome more soon xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 Thank you, thank you, thank you Danni! Loved that Brax got down on one knee to ask Charlie if she would wear his promise ring again The girls learning to ride their bikes was so adorable..loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 Good that Brax didn't listen to Ryan for too long.Intrigued to know where this will go. Quote
JosieTash Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 WOAH !!!! about what Ryan said, but cooooooooooool that Charlie & Brax worked things out !!!! That was ACE !!!!!!!, especially ….. Brax was sitting at the dinner table, holding onto the business card in his hand. Ryan Sullivan....Ryan Sullivan....why did that name ring a bell to him, and why did Charlie have the business card for an advertising firm in her pocket? Ryan Sullivan, Brax read the name once more. ”Her ex.” Brax muttered. Charlie pursed her lips together before she nodded lightly. She sat down at the table and Brax sat back down opposite her. “I ran into him last week, when I went out after our argument. We just talked and then I left. I ran into him again a few days ago, and then again this afternoon, but nothing ever happened. I swear Brax. I don’t want to be with anyone else.” Brax laughed lightly as he ran his hand over the table ledge. “So, you lied to me? How am I supposed to trust that you’re telling me the truth now?” Were you at least tempted to go see him again?” Brax asked. Charlie exhaled lightly as she pursed her lips together, and this silence seemed to give Brax an indication of what her answer would be. “Well look how things are turning out now.” Brax said before he stood up and walked out of the house, slamming the door shut behind him. Charlie rubbed her face with her hands as she sighed. A slight tugging on her top brought her to remove her hands from her face and she looked down to see Riley standing before her. “Well what do you want to do?” Charlie asked. “Eh...my new bike.” Riley smiled. “No.” Charlie shook her head. “You can’t go on your new bike.” “Why?” “Because it’s dark outside.” Charlie said. “Well I not do it yet.” Riley sighed. “How about we go out tomorrow and show you and Paige how to ride the bikes?” Charlie said and Riley nodded in excitement. He looked around at all the drink that was displayed and fought with his demons as hard as he could. It was times like this when he felt he needed a drink most. When things with Charlie got tough, but thinking about how much he could end up losing, how much he would disappoint Charlie and thinking about his kids was enough to stop him reaching for the bottle. He loved his kids more than anything and there was no way he would risk doing anything that would cause him to lose them. “Am I?” Ryan asked. “How does it feel to know you’re partner got intimate with another man? To know she kissed me, touched me, made love to me.” “Enough.” Brax yelled. “I don’t believe you.” “You swear on the lives of the kids that you didn’t sleep with him?” “Yes.” Charlie sighed lightly. “Brax, I swear I didn’t. I didn’t even kiss him, there was nothing there....all we did was talk.” “I guess I just.....I wanted someone to talk too.” Charlie wiped the tears from her face. “Bianca and Rubes...I know that I can talk to them and that they’d be great, but....they know us both and I guess I wanted to talk to someone who didn’t. Who wasn’t as....involved?” Charlie sighed. “I can see now why having this talk with Ryan would be a bad idea, but I just...I wanted a guy’s opinion too.” “Oh you can see now.” Brax said. “Here’s me thinking you’d gone completely crazy wanting to meet up with an ex again to talk about how your current boyfriend didn’t want to get married.” “I’d like it if it did happen....love it even, but I know that we have it pretty great even if it doesn’t.” Charlie smiled lightly. “And it’s not like our relationship would change much, things would basically be the same as they are now. Maybe ever better.” Charlie said. “You know we’d be newlywed’s....Mr and Mrs....it would be new and exciting.” “Yeah.” Brax smiled. “And if things get difficult and we need to divorce that’s when it gets messy.” so Charlie, will you accept my proposal, that one day....maybe soon, I’ll propose?” Charlie smiled lightly as Brax moved forward and got down on one knee. He pulled her promise ring out of his pocket – that he had put there upon his arrival back at the house – and held it up in front of Charlie. “Yes.” Charlie smiled. “I’ll accept your proposal to propose.” Brax smiled as he put the ring back on her finger before they met in a passionate kiss. “I no want 'em.” Riley shook her head as she got off her bike. “Daddy take ‘em off.” “You need them sweetie.” Charlie said as she ran her hand through her daughters hair. “No. Jacob not.” Riley shook her head. “He did when he was your age.” Charlie answered and Riley shook her head. “I no want ‘em.” Riley said. “Daddy.” Riley looked up at Brax and fluttered her eye lashes. “I no need ‘em.” “We could always try her without them.” Brax said as he looked up at Charlie. “But she is my baby.” Charlie said. “I’ll help her.” Brax said. “I won’t let go till I think she is ready.” “But she is my baby.” Charlie said again. “No’s I not a baby.” Riley shook her head. “Paige is.” “No’s I not.” Paige raised her voice as she jumped of her bike and ran over to Riley. “You youngerist.” “No no.” Riley shook her head. “We the same.” “Uh-huh.” Paige nodded. “I twenty two olders than you ay mummy.” “22 minutes, yeah.” Charlie nodded. Paige stuck her tongue out at Riley who stuck hers right back out at her. “Brax.” Charlie raised her voice. “Hold her steady.” “She’s fine.” Brax sighed as he held onto the back of the bike and started running behind Riley as she peddled down the path. “Go on sweetie, you’re doing good.” Brax smiled as he let go of the bike. Riley managed a few more metres before she came crashing down. “Baby.” Charlie shouted as she ran forward and picked up her daughter. Riley giggled as Charlie wiped the dust from her daughter’s shorts. “I’s okay.” Riley said. “I try again.” Riley climbed back up onto her bike and Brax walked forward and put his hand on the back of the bike and once again ran behind Riley as she peddled. When he felt certain she was balanced he let go and Riley continued down the path, riding her bike without support. “Me too.” Brax said. “But at least now they get to be in our wedding.” Brax smiled as he once again placed a kiss on Charlie’s head. “Yeah.” Charlie grinned. “We might have trouble getting Riley in a dress again. You know I had to bribe her with cake for Ruby’s wedding?” “Yeah.” Brax laughed. “But I’m sure I’ll get her in a dress.” “Oh yeah and how do you plan on doing that?” Charlie questioned as she looked up to Brax. “Well that’s just daddy’s little secret.” Brax grinned before he placed a kiss on Charlie’s lips. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 The girls riding the bikes was so cute. Well done on some great chapters. Quote
llywela Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 I've just caught up with the last couple chapters! Omg!! Amazing totally awesome!! They deserve the happy time! Woohooo! Love this fanfic! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!xxx Quote
Jen1205 Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 (edited) I'v missed so much in the last week, More drama I'm proud of Brax I thought he handled the situation with Ryan very well and I'm glad he trusted Charlie enough to know Ryan is just trying to cause trouble. Loved the last chapter with the girls learning to ride their bikes, I think Riley is getting a stubborn streak. Can't wait for your next update Edited March 7, 2012 by Jen1205 Quote
beebee Posted March 7, 2012 Report Posted March 7, 2012 yay 2 updates in one day ... You're amazing!! Really liked this chapter!! how cute were them girls :-) lol Hopefully this is the start of more happiness for chax .. Please update soon xx Quote
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