LauraPhilly!! Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 (edited) That is a very good start, soph1303...looking forward to finding out whose funeral it is! I've a feeling it's Charlie's...?! I can't be sure though. Looking forward to the next chapter! Edited June 12, 2011 by LauraPhilly!! Quote
callyha Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Nice start soph1303 I wanna know whose funeral it is too! I'm thinking the same as LauraPhilly! I think its Charlie's I hope its not though... More soon please :D Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Hmmmm... could it be Martha, Nicole or Charlie? I'm not sure. One of those I think. Continue please. Quote
pembie Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Good start looking forward to more I can't be sure who's died because you have threw some curve balls in there I think it could be Charile through by the way Ruby reacted Very Good Quote
Lucii Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Nice start....I think it might be Charlie's Update soon please x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Really good start, very intrigued about who's dead.I did think maybe it was Martha but after reading some of the other comments on here I'm not so sure...Looking forward to seeing where you take this! Quote
Miranda Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Brilliant start! I think its Martha, but it remains to be seen... Quote
Zetti Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Ooh I like it so far. Intriguing. I think it's Nicole or Charlie... Quote
ldscott Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Like the start of this and look forward to finding out who died! Lisa x Quote
elikell Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Great start. Can't wait to read who's funeral it is. I think it might be Charlie's, but I'm hoping its not! Keep writing. You have me intrigued... Quote
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