Zetti Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Now it decides am allowed to post a comment *Squeals!* A fic about my Heath! Yayy Haha I love how the whole chapter starts in Indi's room and finishes in Indi's room “I’m not trespassing,” he snapped, then came up and put his arms round her, kissing her before she could even react. It wasn’t a nice, tender kiss but more of an insistent, rough one. She could feel every inch of his body against hers, his tongue in her mouth, his teeth catching hers. He wasn’t holding back. Uhoh... oops I dont think Indi is going to like that... I get the feeling that Heath is going to be doing a hell of a lot of chasing... Anyhoo... loved the start, and cant wait for more soon x Quote
Miranda Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Uhoh... oops I dont think Indi is going to like that... Or will she? wait and see.... Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Interesting! I like it. Continue soon please. Quote
Miranda Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Thanks Loz. You know I like unlikely couples Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Thanks Loz. You know I like unlikely couples I know me too! I'm just glad you didn't put Bianca in there!! lol. I wonder if Heath would go for someone like Indi anyway? She's prob a bit young for him though. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Indi and Heath?That's...interesting.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote
Zetti Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Posted May 26, 2011 Uhoh... oops I dont think Indi is going to like that... Or will she? wait and see.... Tease Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 I like this fic ... Great, written well too. Looking forward to more. Love Carina xxx P.S: Sorry for not commenting sooner. Quote
Miranda Posted May 27, 2011 Report Posted May 27, 2011 thanks Red and Carina Carina, you never need to apologise for not commenting cos you are the most reliable commenter I've ever had. Please just do the best you can, don't worry Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted May 27, 2011 Report Posted May 27, 2011 aw Heath's got a crush on Indi. nice dog names! lol. Continue please. Quote
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