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“Well, that proves my point. He’s no gentleman if he made you sleep on the floor. I thought Romeo was backward, but this one-“ Dex shrugged melodramatically. “He’s pre- Neanderthal.”

:lol: Such a Dexy thing to say :lol:

“No, you’ll have to help me.” She gazed at him so sweetly that he smiled, forgetting to look hard. If only he smiled like that all the time he’d look so much better, she thought. Then told herself off being so soppy.

Hey! I would have been soppy as well :wub:

“Me? Yeah right. Like I could afford to go. Like I’m clever enough.” He looked away and she felt guilty.

Loved that line, its just telling us something about Heath and his life, its subtle and effective!

“Just remember, one day I’m gonna be stronger than you!” was Casey’s passing shot to Heath as he reached the door.

That comment had me laughing as well. Casey looking like Heath.. hmm somehow I cant see that :lol:

Loved the update, looking forward to more xx

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