Zetti Posted May 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Aww thanks for updating! It really did make me smile like you said it would Luckily, Indi was peeping out of it, wondering what the commotion was. She lifted the sash window. “Wolverine! Terminator! Quiet!” she hissed. Wolverine! Haha Little did Sid know that Heath was lying at his daughter’s feet under the window ledge, trying not to look up her nightie. Trying not to.. Heath's a little bit naughty... Looking forward to more soon x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Wolverine and Terminator...That was a real laugh old loud moment.Heath getting bored of being evil made me smile as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 That was a great chapter ... fantastically written ... you have a brilliant imagination. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Oooh Indi sneaking Heath Braxton in the shower! Continue please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 That chapter was quite funny in parts - the whole shower saga. It was good, well done, I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Do you know, I could have sworn I posted here to say thanks for the latest comments? But I was obviously imagining it Anyway, thanks Zetti, Red, Carina, Loz I'm glad you found it funny, Carina, that was the intention I think Heath suffers from foot in mouth disease tbh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Heath in the shower well well missy I found it too funny as well Am glad you updated! Looking forward to more soon xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Love that Dex was the one to name the dogs and his almost catching out Indi and Heath.Wonder if he'll ask any more questions about the phantom sneezer... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teespazzr Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 Very good so far. I look forward to more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 Oh thanks Zetti, Red and Teespazzr. Always nice to get a new reader Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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