Bobby Forever Missed Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Great Stuff! You're very talented! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Bretto Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Episode 24 - Slow Recovery The next day (Wednesday), Alison is in class talking to her friends before she heads off to the portable classroom out the back to help Justin and Fiona. Alison: Jenny is not taking this well at all. She's been at the hospital all night. Melissa: Poor Jen. Brock will wake up won't he? Alison: He will. But the doctors say they don't know when he'll make a full recovery. Sylvia: When are Jen and Brock getting married? Alison: July. It's only April now. Erin: Don't worry Alison. Try not to think about it. You've got that learning program to worry about. Alison: I'll try to. *Lolly walks into the classroom* Lolly: Good morning class. Whole Class: Good morning Lolly. Lolly: May I see you for a second please Alison? *Alison walks over to Lolly's desk* Alison: Yes? Lolly: Justin's mother called here to tell you that he won't be able to come in today because he's sick. Alison: All right. Thanks for letting me know Lolly. I'll see you after recess. *Alison walks out of the classroom and goes to the portable classroom with Kat* Alison: Could Fiona come and sit with Naomi and Angela? I don't want her to feel lonely. Kat: Of course. She's more than welcome to sit to them. Alison: Can you believe that Riggot, Leon and Alex asked me to forge their parent's signatures because they jigged school? Kat: You know what their families are like. They're tough on truancy. Alison: I only did it because I didn't want them to get into trouble. Kat: I'm sure you knew what was best for them Alison but forgery is a crime. *Both Alison and Kat go inside the portable classroom where they meet up with Fiona, Naomi and Angela* Fiona: Hi Alison. *goes over to Alison and hugs her* Naomi: Kitty Kat! *kisses Kat's cheek* Angela: Hey! Guess what Kat? Kat: What? Angela: That speech therapy guy you reccomended is helping me correct my lisp. Kat: That's great Angela! I'm so happy for you. Fiona: I'm writing much more faster thanks to you Alison. Alison: That's good to hear. Listen. Do you want to sit with Naomi and Angela today? Justin is at home sick. Fiona: You don't mind Kat? Kat: Of course I don't. *Fiona and Alison then sit with Kat, Naomi and Angela* At Civic High School, Hayley and Leon are in Science when Todd once again gives Hayley a hard time. Todd: Hey retard. Leon: Shut up and leave her alone Todd! Todd: Why should I? Leon: Because I said so! Hayley: No Leon. Let me do the talking. *turns around and faces Todd* I actually feel sorry for you Todd. Because I now I know what kind of a moron you really are. Just because you like to spend every day being a miserable sack of s*** doesn't give you the right to bully other people. Yes I repeated Year 8 but I am NOT ashamed to admit it. I just did it right now in front of the whole class. So you better watch your mouth from now on. Because if you don't you're not going to have many friends at this school! *Todd is too shocked to speak and immediately leaves the classroom* Ben: It's about time he was put in his place. Madison: You certainly told him off girlfriend! Hayley: I certainly did. *smiles* At recess, Hayley tells Alexis about what she did to Todd in Science. Alexis: If only I was there to see the smug look on that a***hole's face! Hayley: How do you know Todd so well? Alexis: We both went to Pittwater High and he used to bully a lot of the special needs kids. One day, I got so fed up with him that I just walked over to him and punched him in the face. I just hope he leaves you alone now. Hayley: Same. *Madison approaches them* Madison: I just spread the word about Todd. Hayley: You little gossip! *laughs* Madison: He won't be bullying anyone for a while I can assure you. Alexis: Amen! That afternoon, Alison goes straight to the hospital when she has finished TAFE. Alison: How is he Jen? Jenny: Just about the same. I haven't been this upset since Nan died. Alison: Some memories are painful. But at least we have each other. Jenny: You're right. *gives Alison a hug* *Brock slowly opens his eyes.* Brock: Je...Je....Jenny. Jenny: Brock? Oh my god you've waken up! *hugs him* Brock: I....lo...lo....love you. Jenny: I love you too future husband. *As Jenny talks to Brock, Heather Roy (Brock's ex-girlfriend who cheated on him) walks into his hospital room* Heather: What the hell are you doing in my boyfriend's hospital room? Alison: Who the hell are you? Heather: I'm Heather Roy. Brock's girlfriend. And you are? Alison: Alison Patterson. Heather: Why are you with my boyfriend? Jenny: For your information Heather. You left Brock for his best friend. Heather: Who are you? Jenny: Jenny Peters. Brock's fiancé! ON THE NEXT EPISODE OF ALISON PATTERSON'S JOURNEY - Alison and Jenny continue to clash with Heather - Sylvia gets the part-time job at Harleys - Leon saves Dina from being kidnapped WHEN ALISON PATTERSON'S JOURNEY CONTINUES Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bretto Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Who wants to do Episode 25? Just send me a message and I'll give you the information on that episode. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Red Ranger 1 Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Woah!Glad Brock seems to be getting better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Great stuff! Update soon xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bretto Posted October 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2010 Episode 25 - Attempted Kidnapping Jenny and Alison are continuing to argue with Heather at the hospital. Heather: Since when were YOU his fiancé? Jenny: Since last month! Heather: What kind of man would go out with an ugly thing like you? Alison: At least she didn't sleep with his best mate! Heather: BUTT OUT!!!! THIS IS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!!!! Alison: THE HELL IT'S NOT!!!! YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A DEVIOUS SLAG!!! Jenny: What Alison said! Heather: BROCK LOVES ME!!!! *Brock looks at Heather* Brock: No I don't! You are nothing but a manipulative and selfish woman who only cares about money and herself! Heather: Honey. I made a mistake and I'm sorry. I LOVE YOU! Brock: Well I don't! You've just wasted your time coming here! Heather: YOU CAN ALL GO TO HELL! *storms out of Brock's hospital room* Alison: Don't bother coming back! Meanwhile, Sylvia is at home when the phone starts to ring. She answers it to find the owner of Harleys is on the other end of the line. Sylvia: Hello. Yes, this is her. That is fantastic! When do I start? Tomorrow afternoon will be fine. Thank you so much. Bye. *Mrs Jackson walks in* Mrs Jackson: Who was that? Sylvia: The owner of Harleys. He just rang to tell me that I got the job. Mrs Jackson: That's great Sylvia! When do you start? Sylvia: Tomorrow afternoon straight after TAFE. Mrs Jackson: I hope you work hard. That's all I can ask for. Sylvia: Thanks Mum. *Both hug each other* That evening, Dina is at the shopping centre with Amy looking at baby furniture in K-Mart. Dina: I love that crib. *looks at a pink lace canopy crib* Amy: So do I. It looks very pretty. Dina: Do you think I can afford it? Amy: Lay-by it first and then get it out when the baby is due. Dina: I found out what sex the baby is. Amy: What is it? Dina: It's a girl. Definately a girl. Amy: I'm so happy! Thought of any names yet? Dina: I like Rose and Daisy. But maybe I should name it after my mother. Amy: What was your mother's name? Dina: Nighat. She was Egyptian. Amy: How old were you and Nina when she died? Dina: We were both 8. She had breast cancer. Amy: Do you visit her grave? Dina: Every year for Mother's Day, Christmas and on her birthday. Amy: My parents live in Newcastle. The only chance I have to see them is every other month. Dina: At least you still see them. Amy: You're right. *Dina goes to the lay-by counter and orders the lace canopy crib, a high chair and other baby equipment* After finishing her shopping and saying goodbye to Amy, Dina is walking home when two men approach her. Dina: What do you want? I have to get home. Kidnapper 1: I need directions to the hospital. Dina: Okay. You just turn.... *As Dina turns her back, Kidnapper 1 covers his hand over her mouth while Kidnapper 2 tries to drag her into their car* Kidnapper 2: Shut your mouth or we'll beat you up. *Dina tries to fight back but can't due to her pregnancy. As the kidnappers try to force Dina into their car on their second attempt, Leon is riding his bike and when he sees what's going on, he runs over to the kidnappers* Leon: LET HER GO!!!! *punching Kidnapper 2 in the face* Kidnapper 1: Rack off kid! *pushes him to the ground* *Dina manages to bite Kidnapper 1's hand* Kidnapper 1: OWW!!!! YOU BITCH!!! COME ON!! LET'S GET OUT OF HERE!!! *The kidnappers get back into their car and speed off.* Leon: Are you all right Dina? *Dina shakes her head and starts sobbing* Leon: Let me take you home. *puts his arm over Dina's shoulders* Meanwhile at their house, Melissa and Nina are eating ice-cream and watching television. Nina: Work is gonna suck tomorrow. I have to work from 4:30 till two in the morning. Melissa: Why? Nina: The manager is chucking a sickie to look after her daughter who IS actually sick. *Outside the house, Leon and Dina have a talk. She has finished crying.* Dina: Thanks for saving me. Leon: You're welcome *gives her a hug* I have to go now. Will you be okay? Dina: I'll be fine. Thanks again. *Leon rides away on his bike while Dina goes inside the house* Nina: How was shopping with Amy? Did you find... *looks at Dina* Dina what's wrong? *Dina doesn't answer and begins to cry again* Melissa: What is it Dina? *goes over to her* Talk to us. *Dina continues to cry while Melissa and Nina comfort her* ON THE NEXT EPISODE OF ALISON PATTERSON'S JOURNEY - Dina confesses to Melissa and Nina about what happened on her way home - Leon seeks comfort from Hayley - Sylvia's first day at work goes off to a good start - Alison and her friends try to spend time with more of the male students at TAFE WHEN ALISON PATTERSON'S JOURNEY CONTINUES Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Red Ranger 1 Posted October 28, 2010 Report Share Posted October 28, 2010 (edited) Hmm.Why would anyone want to kidnap Dina?Loved Jenny's "What Alison said." Edited October 28, 2010 by Red Ranger 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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