karenp Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Great update, well worth the wait . I'm glad you didn't kill aden, what would poor belle do without him. Cant wait for the next update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 I loved the chat between Geoff & Belle. Yes! Aden is awake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 I liked this chapter. The Geoff and Belle talk had the potential, at the beginning, to be a nice thing to take Belle's mind of Aden for a while but the whole scene between them just ended up feeling pointless. And, for me, the fact that it went on for too long didn't help matters. I think just a small scene between them in passing when he came in would have worked better. I guessing the idea was to have Belle relax for a bit, so I liked the idea behind it but unfortunetley it didn't play out as good, for me. Loved the scenes in the hospital. Belle's snapping at Justin for not knowing what was going on was a perfectly realistic reaction right there. Her frustration at not being able to know what was going on was written really nicely. Rachel actually reminded me of real doctor there. The ones who can see how worked up the person is to know whats going on yet will take forever to get to the point. And in the that moment waste time with greetings, useless questions, and trying to get the person who is waiting for the info to calm down. I'm always left thinking, don't you think the best way to calm them down would be to tell them whats going on really quickly? I'm glad Aden's awake. Yeah, it was kinda predictable that Aden wouldn't die. And for once I wanted predictable. I'm happy that there was no shocking twists with you killing him off. Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silly_vanessa Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 fantastic chapter, the wait was worth it. can't wait to see where you take it from here. I can't believe that you even thought about killing him off. but soooo glad that you didn't! seriously brill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Sorry i haven't commented before now, i've just been so busy! Can i just start with YAY!!!!!!!!! Thank God, he's awake!!!! It was so sweet how he was squeezing her hand to respond to her! The bits before that were great too, with Belle not knowing what was going on, but just determined to see him! The bit with Geoff at the start was nice too! I love how you manage to add that edge of humour to it, but you could still Belle wasn't wholly into it, as she had other things on her mind. Incredible writing as always! Hope you can update soon! I can't wait! When can i ever?!?!? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leah1234 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Update tonight??? xxxxxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Sorry, but not tonight. I know it's been a few days, but I'll try my best for tomorrow. Sunday at the latest, I hope! It's just been a full on week with uni and all... Thank God for the weekend! Thanks for asking though! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leah1234 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Yeah I know wat you mean tgif!!!!!! There's no pressure, update when you can!!! xxxxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leah1234 Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Do you know if you are going to update soon??? xxxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 (edited) For once I can say yes! I'm just finishing it off, so it'll be within the hour or so, I hope! It'll definately be up tonight! Thanks for asking and sorry for the wait. xoxo PS. I love that quote in your sig. I have it written out on a stickynote on my wall Edited March 15, 2009 by Taniya_K Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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