Louise_2983 Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! So I already knew he was ok but the fact that he asked if she was ok immediately was just Brilliantly written! Can't wait to see where they go from here! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 (edited) They can totally blame me cos it was AMAZING! Loved the beginning with Geoff so funny, it seemed so much like how Geoff would actually react!! All of Belle's thoughts, feelings and actions were so well written, the detail made it all so realistic and more hard hitting and emotional. There was this wierd kind of tension that kept building up throughout the chapter which made me fear the worse! haha I really thought something was seriously wrong at the end! you definately had people fooled lol sooooooooooooooo glad he woke up!!!! Fantastic as per hun! looking forward to more Edited March 10, 2009 by LAURZY! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bikinikill Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Thank goodness you didn't kill him. Yay! He's ok. Yay! Great work Taniya. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Tanyia!!! That was not funny, you've had me worried for weeks and weeks about Aden, I've not been sleeping, having horrible thoughts and all along you knew, [and others ] that he was going to be okay!!!!!! I've never been more scared in my life! That was just............... WOW i'm in floods here!!! I swear my heart skipped a beat when he squeezed her hand!!! I have never been so relieved in my life... and Aden asked her if she was okay.... I cant believe he's okay! eeeeeeeeeek cant wait for you to update again xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leah1234 Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *JUMPS FOR JOY* He's awake and breathing on his own!!!! Loved the chapter Update soon xxxxxxxxxxx I can't believe you thought about killing aden!!! Tut tut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradyell Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 seriously Taniya!! If you had killed him off i don't know what i'd have done with myself!! I'm a wreck now and he's O.K THANK GOD HE'S O.K!!! What is sooooooo completely brill about your writing is that right up untill the moment he squeezed her hand it really could have gone either way!! There was no guessing what was gonna happen! Brill brill brill!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hitmanfan Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Thank you, it was worth the wait. I thought that you were going to kill him for a moment, so glad you didn't!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 (edited) YAY! Aden's alive! I loved the stuff with Geoff. You write him perfectly in character. It's sweet that the thing first Aden asked was how Belle and the baby were. I want an Aden. Edited March 10, 2009 by Lise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenpen08 Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Ah he's okay!!! Your seriously had me convinced he was a goner! Superbly written! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Yay! Aden's OK. Brilliantly written as usual. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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