adellejefferiesxox Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 I love the way you write Jen, the readers can really get inside the mind of the character. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Love that he couldn't keep away from her...and that she didn't react in quite the manner he was hoping.And Lucas and Cassie seems interesting as well.Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 That was a good chapter It was'nt too full on, you wrote the dscription and the dialouge really well Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lachsm Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 great chapter Jen i don't think it was to full on at all i totally agree with laurzy. i think stubborn is the only word that describes belle the dialogue was spot on as usual keep up the great work Jen Marc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 That was really good, again, Jen. Not full on, at all. I love how you describe everything. I've gotta agree with Laura and Marc - Belle sure is stubborn. I love Lucas denying that there's something going on with he and Cassie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 That was really good. I'm pleased that Belle and Cassie have sorted things. YAY! Cassie and Lucas are together. Belle still thinks she has no feelings for Drew? She really is stubborn, isn't she?!?! Brilliantly written, as always. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lachsm Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 (edited) Yay belle and cassie sorted themselves out vintage belle asking cassie is luc a good kisser wish drew had come down the beach and kissed belle though, not happy Jen joking great as always jen Marc Edited June 29, 2009 by lachsm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 Loved the opening, with Belle utterly confused.Her conversation with Cassie was great and very funny, especially Cassie's embarrassment about what had happened.Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 Good update I like the opening, with Belle confused. Glad she and Cassie have sorted things out. Really well written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 I too am pleased that Cassie and Belle sorted everything out, now all Belle has to do is tell Cassie about her kiss(s) with Drew I really loved that chapter, Belle's thoughts, Cassie expressions, their friendship is so enlightening! update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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