LAURZY! Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 That was so good! Loved it, one of my fave chapters so far I really like how you write it from their point of views, the description you use makes it seem so real Cannot wait to see what happens at the formal!! Brill update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Loved that opening bit with Belle feeling all insecure.Nice bit of banter between them and Belle and Cassie going all girly.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 That was a good chapter. I liked the nervousness of it all. I wonder where Drew, actually, went at the end? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 That was a good chapter, I liked the nervousness of it all, and Belle and Cassie with their girly chat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 That was brilliant! Loved seeing a more insecure side to Belle Once again written superbly, wouldn't expect anything different though Where did Drew go!? lol Oh and btw, i LOVED the white dress Jess wore to the Logies, very good choice As i was reading i was thinking it sounded familiar lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 wow... I just caught up lol.... I loved every second of it, absoloutely brilliant Jen, and your right, Jess did look gorgeous at the 2007 logies I dont know what else to say... just perfect! update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Great chapter.Drew was a bit of a jerk when he told her about the bet but turns out it didn't matter that much.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 That was great, Jen. I liked the end especially. Hopefully, they don't think the kiss at the end was a mistake or anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 (edited) That was a great chapter Jen. Thought Drew was a bit of a jerk, I liked the end especially. Its great they still want to be together This is one of my favourite fictions on here, your writing, as well as your fabulous artwork is really good Edited July 23, 2009 by zoelouise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 That was AMAZING! I thought Drew had blown his chances but apparently not, they are so alike it's scary!! lol I love the way you ended it, it seemed to me that they finally let their guards down, even though no words were actually spoken (if that makes sense? lol) my fave bit of the whole chapter definately Just brilliant! This fic is so good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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