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:lol: Loved the ending!

Awwww i didn't want Belle to walk off lol So sweet that they kissed :wub: Why did he have to drunk?! lol

I liked having both points of view again, it's really good to get both of their thoughts

Brill as per!

Cant wait to read more, hopefully Belle wont be too hard or stubborn toward Drew lol

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oooo lucas and cassie :wub:

i absolutely love the way you write out their thoughts its great to see it from their point of view especially when belle and drew fight with themselves over whether there is an attraction or not

grrrrr why did he have to be drunk :angry:

great work as always Jen

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That wasn't too full on at all, i loved it! the description made it seem so real

She walked off again?! My god she's stubborn lol

I'm quite liking Lucas and Cassie :D

That was really well written, the description and dialogue were spot on :D

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