matticus01 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Oh Jen I loved that chapter, but not for the reason everyone else thought... I loved how everything was out in the open... how Drew and belle got into a fight at the formal and I loved how everything turned out... But the be honest, and i'm sorry to criticize you... but I thought it would have ended differently... like Belle and Drew getting into this huge argument, maybe a slap, punch, or them both saying words that they would or wouldn't regret later to each other. The ending for me, I would have liked to be different but amazing chapter still Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 But the be honest, and i'm sorry to criticize you... but I thought it would have ended differently... like Belle and Drew getting into this huge argument, maybe a slap, punch, or them both saying words that they would or wouldn't regret later to each other. Please don't apologise for your opinion or for saying you wish things were different. I really appreciate everyone's opinions and views and comparing what they thought was going to happen with what I write. To be honest, I thought about making everything explode in their faces, but it seemed they had had a lot of fighting/misunderstandings already. But, never fear this isn't the end. There's more coming that hopefully will meet your expectations. Thank you so much to Red Ranger 1, Lise, Zoe and Laura also for your consistent comments. Thank you for taking time to write meaningful comments. I really appreciate it. Heads up for the next chapter, it gets a little ... full on? You'll see . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I liked that chapter, it was great. Really well written, and the descriptions of the characters were fab A great read before I go to sleep Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 That was really well written.And really intense.Looking forward to seeing where you go from here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 That was unbelievable! The descriptions and intensity you created was so good! There are no more words apart from, fantastic, amazing, brilliant, unreal... you get the gist Loved it, cannot wait for more!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The first scene was brilliant. The writing was fantastic. Can't wait to see what's coming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I liked this chapter, with them being all happy. It was a great read Jen, really good writing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Nice moment of happiness.Some cute moments between Cassie and Luc as well.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Awwwww that was sweet! I hope Cassie and Lucas get together too, they'd be a cute little foursome Looking forward to seeing what happens and where you take this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 That was good. They are cute. I'm intrigued by your comment at the end. Can't wait to see what's coming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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