matticus01 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 wow... I didn't even know you had updated, but awesome stuff... they really are cute, and Cassie and Lucas are stuffingly cute as well so great chapter and Im glad you didn't take my opinion to heart, Im just glad your still going with this +) update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 (edited) That was awesome, Jen. Drew's one silly boy. Hopefully, they sort things out or he sorts himself out. YAY for Jazz! It was a good way of bringing her into the story. She was very, well...Jazz. I loved the first scene. They were so cute together with all their banter. Edited August 12, 2009 by Lise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Oh boy, Drew can be a child at times.Hopefully there was a good reason why he didn't tell Jazz about them.Loved Belle's reaction to their home. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 That was an awesome chapter Jen, it was really good Drew is very silly is'nt he, hope they sort things out. It was a good way to bring Jazz into the story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Awwwww Jazz!! Drew was just an idiot really..... Loved how Belle was in awe of the place and Drew was so nonchalant about it Brill update! cant wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack+Martha4Eva! Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Aw i just caught up on last few chapters It's really good i hope Drew and Belle sort things out fast Update Soon:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 (edited) Good chapter, with all the discriptions of the characters in this, all the questions that were going around in Drew's head. Great work Jen Edited August 18, 2009 by ~Zoe~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Liked Drew's thoughts although he really needs to go and talk to Belle.Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 That was brilliant! I love how you wrote it from both perspectives, really felt for them both, they really should talk soon Great update Loved it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 That was great. They really just need to talk to each other. Still loving Jazz but she doesn't sound like much of a mother. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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