Red Ranger 1 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Brilliant chapter.I love the way you captured Drew and the way he's just lashing out because his world's crumbled around him, even if it wasn't a particularly good world.Like the way you brought Peter into it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Brilliant chapter Jen I liked the way you explained in great detail, with good discription with Drew's thoughts and his anger towards Jazz. I like how you brought Peter into this, hope that Jazz gets the help that she needs now! Really good update chick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Only one more chapter to go But at least Drew is back for the final chapter. I really enjoyed that Jen. I loved how you described how Belle was feeling, it was as if you were in her head. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 wow just wow! all the emotion in this chapter was amazing! just brilliant Cant wait for the last chapter, am seriously on the edge of my seat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Awww it will be sad for this story to come to an end I loved how you described how Belle was feeling, it was as if you were in her head. I agree! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 That was brilliant Jen, I enjoyed reading that One more chapter to go At least Drew is back for the final chapter Looking forward to reading the final chapter Update soon x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 As ever, you did a really good job of capturing Belle's thoughts.I loved the conversation between her and Cassie, from breathlessly recounting what the gossips were saying to giving some pretty good insights.Looking forward to the ending!Um...you know what I mean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Wow, that was really good! Loved the way you portray Belle's feelings Cant believe it's nearly over! Really looking forward to seeing how it ends though, i really hope they talk Brill update chick! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 That was brilliant! I love the way you descibe their thoughts. I hope Belle and Drew sort everything out. I'm sad that this is finishing but it's been great to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Aww man, I really don't want this to end. It's so good. I've loved reading every bit of it. But why did she run? Silly girl... he better chase after her. I hope everything gets sorted it out. You're an awesome writer. It's been a pleasure to read, can't wait to see how it ends, even if it means that it'll be ending. (if you get what I mean) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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