Red Ranger 1 Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Second the above two comments(or should that be third?), there's a few of us reading this story too and I would like it if you finished it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lachsm Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 just caught up on your fic kev its great please finish it Marc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krissie Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 I thought i wouldn't like any anyone less than Claudia but congrats to Tina who has seccessfully taken that place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Kevin- Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Sorry guys , this chapter is extremely bad... Thanks for all the lovely comments Chapter 7 "Geoff " Belle gushed "Where the hell were you , I've been loooking for you everywhere . Its Nicole , she's been rushed to hospital " Belle mumbled "Why whats up with her , is it serious ? " Geoff worried "Its the baby I think " Belle replied "Oh no .." he gasped "How far away is the hospital " he asked " Not far , come on lets go " Natalie stood up from her seat when she saw the doctor come from Nicole's room. "Is she alright " she begged "Your daughter is fine , we managed to stop the bleeding but I'm afraid shes suffered a miscarriage" the doctor inforfmed her " Oh God " she put her hands up to her mouth "Can I go in and see her " she asked "yes of course , but not for long , she needs to rest" the doctor urged "OK , thanks " she smiled. *knock knock* "Hey honey " she entered the room "How are you feeling " she breathed as she sat on the bed next to her Nicole turned around and buried her head in the pillows. "I'm sorry , that was a really stupid question " she apologised to an unresponsive Nicole "I will just let you go and get some rest , I'll be back later " she gently stroked Nicoles back before she got up and left the room. Outside the room Natalie broke down as she realised how much she has failed her daughter.... "Hello " Belle answered her phone "Hey Belle is Geoff with you " Tina asked "Yeah he is why " "Because I need to speak with him" "Geoff, its Tina she wants to speak to you" I don't want to speak to her at the moment " Geoff replied "Tina , he said he will speak to you later " "where are you guys anyway " Tina pursued "Whats with all the questions " Belle asserted "I was just asking " "Well its Nicole , shes in hospital , she was brought in earlier with bleeding " Belle informed her "Oh , I'm on my way then " "No we're alright , I spoke to her mum and the doctor said that she doesn't need loads of people turning up " Oh ok " "Look I have to go now , I'll speak to you later " Belle said her goodbyes and hung up the phone "God that girl is quite annoying " Belle frowned "I know " Geoff agreed. "So where is everyone " Marc asked Tina "At the hospital , apparently Nicole was rushed there after she started bleeding " she answered "Is the baby OK " " we will know more later when Belle and Geoff arrive at the hospital " Tina replied "Where was Nicole last night ? " Marc wondered "I think Geoff said she spent the night with some guy" she lied "are you serious " Marc couldn't believe it "Would Nicole do that " "She would do anything " Tina sighed "Which way do we go " Geoff asked as they entered the hospital "Actually Geoff I have to go to the bethroom , you go ahead up to Nicole and I'll follow you up" she insisted "Ok , see you then " Geoff walked towards the elevator as Belle walked towards the bathroom. She sat down on the toilet seat before reaching into her bag and pulling out a pregnancy test. She looked up at the ceiling and took a deep breath... Belle takes the pregnancy test , is it positive or negative ? How will Geoff react to Nicole's bad news ? Marc packs his bags - can Belle make him stay ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor438 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 I thought i wouldn't like any anyone less than Claudia but congrats to Tina who has seccessfully taken that place. Me too althought there was Melody haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 Gd chapter, thanx for continuing!!! Can't wait to find out what geoff does!! Hope "Niff" are ok! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaJane123 Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 Love it. Poor Nic, Thnx 4 continuing. Cant wait to find out what happens next Xxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 thanks for updating. Poor Nic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 poor nic!! hope geoff won't take the news to badly.. He needs to be strong for nicole Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krissie Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 WOW. IM out of words to describe what i would do to Tina... but have a drawing... :evil2: Poor Nic i hope Geoff takes care of her and Tina (but in totally different ways). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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