Laura Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Great chapter! Poor Tina. I bet she's going to cause trouble now. And Marc and Belle Well its better then Aden and Belle Can't believe Nicole is pregnant! Can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Great chapter. Geoff and Nicole-going to be parents! Tina-it doesnt sounds really good. Marc and Belle-hmmm I don't mind if they end up as a couple. *shrugs shoulders* Update sooon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Oh boy, bit of a bombshell there.At least Geoff seemed happy about it, even if Tina didn't.Marc's a fast worker, isn't he? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Kevin- Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 OK doesn't look like this fic is popular at all and I dont want to spend ages writing a fic that nobody reads. I'll give it another few days to see if I get any more comments I got a good few comments after the 1st chapter and I think the 2nd chapter may have put people off. But I have now come away from that theme and I have a couple of exciting ideas planned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MizzyBee123 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 im interested!! i think you're ideas are shaping up well =] please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Not liking Tina anymore. she should leave Goeff and Nicole alone. Thanks for updating your fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Really liked that chapter - hope you manage to keep Geoff and Nicole together because seeing a little G/N family would be pretty cute (much later, future fics possibly) This Tina seems a little odd.. but if she can leave Geoff alone she'll be fine Keep writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emma Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Omg! Very interesting chapter! Tina sounds a tad strange! Cant wait to read the next one Exciting stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 CHAPTER 2 – I couldn’t stop smiling. It was just so reminiscent of a horror movie and I could just picture Nicole and Belle acting like that. It looks like Geoff has decided that sin is the way after all. Who are those masked men and what do they want with them? (I’m presuming they’ve been kidnapped). CHAPTER 3 – Oh, you decided to ditch the horror movie theme. I was actually looking forward to that and really wanted to find out who those masked men were. It’s good to see Geoff showing less of a Christian side and start acting like the rest of us mere mortals. I actually think he wanted Nicole to finish with him and now that she’s pregnant he’s changed his mind. Not a good basis for their relationship. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Kevin- Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Looks like I will be continuing this fic after all seeing as people actually like it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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