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And nitpicking but Belle's parent's didn't give her a name beginning with B. They called her Susan.

Nitpick acknowledged.I ummed and ahhed about it but eventually decided I liked the line and just kept it in and hoped nobody would notice...

Thanks for your comments, everyone.

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