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I thought it was a great chapter once again, and loved the interruptions but the idea of Annie and Jai getting married is so creepy to me.

I don't like them singularly or as a couple on haa anyway but i guess i'll have to see where you take it. I don't really know if i'm meant to like them or not cos i know they're just trying to fit the story into the recquirements so it makes sense in that respect.

Anyway, it was great, update soon! :D

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Annie's and Jai's story has to the funniest, sorry about lack of comments have been so busy :lol: but I love this but I miss clueless Annie :P

I love Aden's line at the end of the last update :P Classic Aden & the way you incoporated Geoff and Aden in it :P

Hope you update soon xx

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