Louise_2983 Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Sorry had a busy week, there will be an update tomorrow I promise! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokkafella125 Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 that wont do! i go on holiday tomorrow! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Just read the whole thing awsome love it bring adelle back together great work more soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 My god, you had me in tears reading that!! That was so good, very well written. I loved how Belle was there for him in the church, very sweet Fantastic update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Wow... that chapter was just... wow. It had everything! I don't even know where to start! The funeral was just magnificent! I loved how you made the comparison of Aden having to carry his father even in death, and that bit where Belle did his speech for him was just so moving. The ending was AOL. That explanation was so sad [about why she slept with Angelo], and I think that you captured exactly why she did it perfectly. That last line... aw! She's finally home. I just hope that you keep Adelle together now, and that she tells Angelo. Can't wait for more! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 (edited) Thanks guys, I did warn you this part would be weepy lol! The funeral was so hard to write, so I'm glad you think I did it justice! Edited October 26, 2008 by Louise_2983 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeysmoke Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 awww see that reunion between aden and belle was so much sweeter than the one that happened in the show. that was really well written by the way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 awww see that reunion between aden and belle was so much sweeter than the one that happened in the show. Aww thank you. I LOVED the reunion so that really means a lot to hear But now I'm scared to post the next part, you're all going to hate me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 That's not good... you better post it now and RUN! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 OMG that last chapter had me in tears!! You wrote it so beautifuly, wow That last bit was beautiful it was so sweet. Brilliant. Update soon xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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