Taniya_K Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 It was really realistic! Especially the way you describes everything, it just made it like an actual script from H&A [maybe a bit better?]. No that's good it was meant to make you laugh as I wrote it with the line "He'll wake up, realise where he is, get dressed and climb out the window...preferably in that order" in mind as he obviously didn't do it in that order lol. Lol, that's what I was thinking. And then I imagined Aden in just his trousers, topless, climbing out of her window and Angelo standing there frowning [which made me laugh]. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cutiepie379 Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Loved the last chapter. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aden+Belle forever Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Just read the whole fic, loved it, really great work Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 loved it can't wait for more it was awesome and really well written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 I loved that especially the last bit. I laughed too. It will be interesting to see if Belle can explain her way out of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 Loved it-had been reading every chapter Update soon!!! ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aden+Belle forever Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Awesome chapter, loved how much Belle cares for Aden , despite the fact she is with Angelo Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Aw! Loved the Angelo v Aden showdown! Glad Aden's the one in the right here! So cute how he stopped because of Belle, and then protected her. Lol at Belle's excuses at the beginning. Can't wait for more! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 I don't know how much of that was supposed to be funny... but I found pretty much all of it funny. You should write comedy, you're good at it. But it should have been shirtless and raining... other than that it was awesome and i loved it!! Can't wait till you get more up And it's believable that Belle could give Aden a black eye... I hope Annie believes it... it would be funny having her trying to avoid belle or not get her angry lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 (edited) Thank you, I like to think I have a good sense of humour lol. Glad you all liked it. The next part is definitely a weepy one I warn you now! Edited October 21, 2008 by Louise_2983 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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