monkeysmoke Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 ooo nice start. Interesting place to take it from too! I like the fact you're writing from Belle's perspective as well, makes it a bit different! xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 (edited) I REALLY like this!!!! Excellent writing style always helps, so five stars on that front! I loved the Wizard of Oz metaphor! Interesting idea with Geoff wanting Belle's help with that kind of assignment! I'm definitely looking forward to more of this!!! Update soon!! Edited October 12, 2008 by wrongturntaken Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 wow. this fic is going to be good!!! Poor Belle, Poor Aden, :( cant wait to read more xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Thanks guys, glad you like it I didn't realise writing from Belle's POV was unusual lol, it just felt like the right angle for the story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Wow... that was just so... wow! I loved the intensity of it, how realistic it seemed and the fact that it was from Belle's POV. Not to meantion the comparisons to Wizard of Oz. Brilliant. Loved the ending where she finally helps Geoff. Hasn't Belle been help hostage like 3 times now? She really does have that experience, doesn't she? Cannot wait for more at all! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Wow... that was just so... wow! I loved the intensity of it, how realistic it seemed and the fact that it was from Belle's POV. Not to meantion the comparisons to Wizard of Oz. Brilliant. Loved the ending where she finally helps Geoff. Hasn't Belle been help hostage like 3 times now? She really does have that experience, doesn't she? Cannot wait for more at all! xoxo Thank you! Lol I didn't actually think about how many times she has been held hostage, it's going to be the latest time by Aden she's going to tell Geoff about! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 I thought you Updated then. btw did I say before that your writing skills are amazing!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Damn, I thought you had updated too! Oh, and thanks for clearing that up. I guess that why she got raelly angry with Geoff. I just realised how much sense your title means now... well, that is if you go down the road in my hears, which I doubt you will cos your imagination is probably better than mine! Can't wait till you do actually update! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 The title will make sense next part lol I promise! Update will probably be tomorrow evening UK time. And thank you xKnomex! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 That was a great first chapter, cant wait to see were you go with it Looking forward to reading more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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