LAURZY! Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Awww it was great that it was Belle opening up to Aden instead of the other way round!! Great update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Thank you everyone! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 That was really good! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Thank you I'm getting way too involved with this fic I think, I already have ideas for a sequel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 ^ Lol, I was like that! I had planned out two sequels way before I finished 'Unlucky'. But I'm glad to hear that you're gonna do a sequel. Totally loving this fic! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 I keep thinking you are updating oo a sequal! You can never get tooinvolved in a fic haha xxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 LOVED that chapter!!!!! the board game thing was really sweet, and her shaving him! I'm a little stunned by the ending, it was brilliant but you made me feel kind of weird so the only way i can think to put it is stunned. It was perfect, the way they so nearly kissed but you brought Belle back to 'reality' and kind of awkwardly... excellent writing!!! Please update soon!!! I'm loving this!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 loved the last two chapters. more soon please... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 I'm a little stunned by the ending, it was brilliant but you made me feel kind of weird so the only way i can think to put it is stunned. It was perfect, the way they so nearly kissed but you brought Belle back to 'reality' and kind of awkwardly... excellent writing!!! To be honest I found it awkward writing it! I actually nearly changed it because it made me uncomfortable but that was the atmosphere I was trying to create so I left it as it was - so glad it came across! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokkafella125 Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 any chance of an update? x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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