Aden+Belle forever Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 You wrote that chapter so well, but the ending was really sad, poor Aden Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 WOW... the description of the memories of his grandfather were just... WOW! Aden telling Belle about it almost had me in tears, you wrote that so well, it was fantastic! I loved the dialogue in this chapter, it was quirky and serious in the right places, it really fitted the storyline! (which i'm loving btw) Great chapter! Probably my favourite so far! Please update soon!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAM27# Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Another great chapter...How you described Aden's fear about his grandfather was amazing!!!! Can't wait for more!! This is a really fantastic fic, good job!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 (edited) You wrote that chapter so well, but the ending was really sad, poor Aden Please update soon Lol the ending was meant to be funny! Thank you everyone and wrongturntaken I'm so happy it was your favourite chapter because I just didn't feel people had reacted to it in the same way as the others so I'm glad I pleased someone. Sneek peek of the next chapter: She pouted slightly in an attempt to convince him but his expression remained unchanged. “Ok, so what if we make it interesting?” she grinned cheekily at him. “And how exactly do you intend on doing that?” “Well, how about we raise the stakes a little? If I win I get whatever I want and if you win you get...” Edited November 9, 2008 by Louise_2983 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 WOW that was amazing!! your writing is unreal! loved the dialogue! It had me in tears, and it had me laughing! Brill update, looking forward to the next chapter, like the sound of the sneak peek Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 ooo the next chapter looks brilliant!!!! argh sneak peeks make me impatient, When do you think it will be up? xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matilda Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Wow I just love this fic. You conveyed Aden's feelings about his grandfather really well. Sure you're not a psychologist?! I'm also loving the interaction between Aden and Belle though am still finding it difficult to grasp that it's Angelo's bubba not Aden's. Anyway am looking forward to reading more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Lol thank you! And no I'm a lawyer actually Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissOlivia22 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Sneap peek looks interesting XD Any idea when the update will be up ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 In a matter of minutes, just writing the last few lines. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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