More Than Anyone (by vale4eva) - comments

[bay girl]

One of thems going to cheat. I just know it. You're evil Rach.

[dee83]

update soon plz

[valli]

Poor Martha! Leon is a creep! Jack needs to stop dancing with Laurie and help Martha!

Now I’m starting to dislike Laurie. “So, does the birthday boy fancy a dance?". Please! Go away, Laurie! You’re in the way! If Jack doesn’t see that Martha is in trouble and something happens to her, I’m holding you responsible!

More please!

[Barbara]

Poor Martha!

Leon is a creep, a jerk...

Jack, go and save her!!! Martha needs your help!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

[kaciexox]

Rach!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How could you do this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jacky has to save her

and then get back togther

I can't believe you left it there

Please update soon

[bay girl]

If Jack's stupid decision to dance with that dog, ends up with him not noticing Martha getting hurt; i'll rip his face off. GRR. Makes me mad.

[Tasha]

HOw dare you do that to Martha. I hate you

More please

[Channy!!!]

Leon is an ass...

Jack's got to stop dancing with Laurie and save Martha (deck Leon lol)..

Then they can get back together again.

Wahh what a cliffhanger to leave it at.

Please UPDATE

Xx

[beckyboo]

Yayyyy you updated

That was great!

Stupid Jack

Poor Martha!

Update ASAP

xxx

[dolly-999]

Nooooo, not Martha, Leon's a jerk, wait no that's an insult to Jerks.

Let me guess and now while Jack's flurting with Laurie, Martha's going to get raped and trust even less than she already did for the rest of her life, so basically it's Lauries fault cause if she wasn't there then Jack and Martha wouldn't be 'taking a break' and Martha wouldn't of been out on the balcony and there for Leon wouldn't of even talked to her at all.

Anyway I'll stop rambling, very well written Rach, can't wait to read what happens next.