Tasha Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Smart Jack with the no sirens theory. He does have half a brain Corey is an a$$, but loved Jack taunting him with the hot sex GReat chapter. How SuperJack better save Martha More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Amy~ Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Oooh new chapter! “We didn’t come here to talk about your sex life Holden,” McGrath told him. Even I cringed when I read that. And now they'll find Martha Kick Karen's ass and live happily ever after. Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Yay, go Jack. Loved some of the lines in there , Corey desurved it. Hope he gets there in time, Karen reminds me of Mary of neighbours, lol, well that's the picture I have of her in my mind anyway. Can't wait to read what happens next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Jack is soo cute being all protective of Alex and Martha Love it Jacky has to find her update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 So Jack's not just a pretty face then That was fab!!!!! I really Wanted to kill Corey myself!!!!!!! Poor Jack Update soon xxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Took him long enough Now go get her back Jack Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Jack's so clever! Aww, and he's the doting husband and protective father; how adorable Loved the way he was taunting Corey but, Corey was dishing it out also Grr, the way Corey was always snarling and gloating was really annoying; he was getting way under my skin Now that they know where Martha is, I hope she's ok. Please update soon; this is really great! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Jack's so clever! Aww, and he's the doting husband and protective father; how adorable Loved the way he was taunting Corey but, Corey was dishing it out also Grr, the way Corey was always snarling and gloating was really annoying; he was getting way under my skin Now that they know where Martha is, I hope she's ok. Please update soon; this is really great! What she said. I love Corey though. The Corey/Jack-ness. Love it! I have hiccups Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted June 3, 2007 Report Share Posted June 3, 2007 Jack's so clever! Aww, and he's the doting husband and protective father; how adorable Loved the way he was taunting Corey but, Corey was dishing it out also Grr, the way Corey was always snarling and gloating was really annoying; he was getting way under my skin Yeah totally agree. Corey is such a slimebag (but I did love him lol) Go Jacky Go More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 (edited) That was dramatic! Great stuff. Karens finally gone, good ridance I say, you psycho woman you Excellent writing, looking forward to when Jack, Martha and alex can be together again Update soon Ps. Fluff please Edited June 5, 2007 by vale4eva Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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