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“No,” Martha cried out as she lunged forward and tried to grab hold of the woman. But her efforts were for nothing.

It was too late. Karen was gone.

She's just tried to kill you.

Are you crazy wanting to save her!!!!!!

Thank god shes ok!!!!!!!!!

But I guess its nearly over :( :(

Yay Karen's gone!!!!!!!!

Update soon

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:o That was fan-tas-tic!! Really, really intense!

Karen's dead? Oh my god, I'm so relieved for Martha! That must have been awful for Jack, to watch Martha in peril like that. Thank goodness they got there when they did *gulps*

Hopefully thats the end of that saga; more happier times now please? :)

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Right, so iread this last night, but then my internet died on me, and i just gave up and went to bed. So ill comment now

SuperJack came to the rescue. Im glad Karen is gone, well hopefully, they better still go down for her body, just in case she miraculously survived :P Martha trying to help her? Why does she have to have such a kind soul <_< But im glad she is safe :) Great chapter

More please

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FINAL CHAPTER: What decision will Martha make about her relationship with Brett?

:o

I had to do a double take on that: Final chapter :(

But new fic coming soon im hoping! Cant wait for that :D

Lovely chapter, poor Martha, I bet she feels rotten now :( its not her fault though.

Glad JnM and alex are all snuggled up back together now :wub:

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