The End Of The Road? (by Lilone) - comments

[allibaz91]

Yay you posted it!!

I love it TONNES Lil! Pete and Lara - much better than Panda

The description and dialogue was fantastic - and I think there's chemistry

Lol can just picture Jack catching them, too!! Would be hilarious!!

More soon (ish) please - it's terrific!

[*~Abi~*]

lol at pete are fitzy skinny dipping they are sooooo gonna get caught a classic add loved it great start hun

xx

[Mrs Bishop]

wow lil great story

[Cerise]

Good start Lil Don't forget to fill out the Form though

[clarky24]

This is a great story. I really like Pete and Lara together. I always thought that they would make a good couple. It would be funny if Jack caught them because i want to see how the try and explain their way out of this situation. Look forward to reading the next part.

[swfc]

I was wondering when you were ever going to write a fic with Fitzy/Pete.... And you finally did. Which makes it good.

That was brilliant, Lil. I can' t wait to see Jack and Harper's face when they find them.

Update soon.

[allibaz91]

Let them get together! :D

Loved it lol - drunk Pete!!

And Drew's a cheeky beggar - but so right

More!!

[clarky24]

That was a great update. I loved it how Drew was giving Peter a hard time about being caught skinny dipping. It was great how Dan was joining in to a lesser degree as well. Im looking forward to reading about Peter and Laras heart to heart and the devastating accident.

[swfc]

Omg, that was absolutely hillarious. Awesomely written, Lil. Loved it to bits.

Can't wait for their heart-to-heart. Another accident? What's it with Peter and accidents of some kind?

And, I have to admit, Drew is one cheeky lil boy.

Update soon.

[Oxidizer]

Jack looked over at Pete’s boxers near the side of the lake then noticed a bra and thong near his.

Pete gave jack a little grin as Jack begun to laugh, “You naughty detective”

OMG! That cracked me up.