allibaz91 Posted April 4, 2007 Report Share Posted April 4, 2007 Yay you posted it!! I love it TONNES Lil! Pete and Lara - much better than Panda The description and dialogue was fantastic - and I think there's chemistry Lol can just picture Jack catching them, too!! Would be hilarious!! More soon (ish) please - it's terrific! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*~Abi~* Posted April 5, 2007 Report Share Posted April 5, 2007 lol at pete are fitzy skinny dipping they are sooooo gonna get caught a classic add loved it great start hun xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs Bishop Posted April 5, 2007 Report Share Posted April 5, 2007 wow lil great story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted April 5, 2007 Report Share Posted April 5, 2007 Good start Lil Don't forget to fill out the Form though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clarky24 Posted April 5, 2007 Report Share Posted April 5, 2007 This is a great story. I really like Pete and Lara together. I always thought that they would make a good couple. It would be funny if Jack caught them because i want to see how the try and explain their way out of this situation. Look forward to reading the next part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 I was wondering when you were ever going to write a fic with Fitzy/Pete.... And you finally did. Which makes it good. That was brilliant, Lil. I can' t wait to see Jack and Harper's face when they find them. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
allibaz91 Posted April 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 Let them get together! :D Loved it lol - drunk Pete!! And Drew's a cheeky beggar - but so right More!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clarky24 Posted April 8, 2007 Report Share Posted April 8, 2007 That was a great update. I loved it how Drew was giving Peter a hard time about being caught skinny dipping. It was great how Dan was joining in to a lesser degree as well. Im looking forward to reading about Peter and Laras heart to heart and the devastating accident. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted April 9, 2007 Report Share Posted April 9, 2007 Omg, that was absolutely hillarious. Awesomely written, Lil. Loved it to bits. Can't wait for their heart-to-heart. Another accident? What's it with Peter and accidents of some kind? And, I have to admit, Drew is one cheeky lil boy. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted April 9, 2007 Report Share Posted April 9, 2007 Jack looked over at Pete’s boxers near the side of the lake then noticed a bra and thong near his. Pete gave jack a little grin as Jack begun to laugh, “You naughty detective” OMG! That cracked me up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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