HeavenForbid Posted April 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2007 (edited) Great chapter Loved it Make it be that it never ends! I hope Jack gets there! Update soon xx Edited April 23, 2007 by laineyloo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted April 23, 2007 Report Share Posted April 23, 2007 Tony cracks me up! So not what you want to hear when you tell your dad your wifes in labour! lol Great chapter, was this a one shot!? ..... Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted April 24, 2007 Report Share Posted April 24, 2007 Lol at Tony. "Oh...' Great chapter Becky. All the action and drama! Rachel was funny as well. You've done well considering this did start out as a one shot. I don't want it to end either... Update soon okay! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 24, 2007 Report Share Posted April 24, 2007 Tony. Becky, please make it a boy, for your favourite Aussie friend And Jacky, get your scrawy behind to your wife right this instant, before i put foot up it Great chapter More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 24, 2007 Report Share Posted April 24, 2007 Well dont Becky you have done well since your little issue with Ava. Only 1 or 2 chapters left Better make them good. I hope Jack makes it in time. Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted April 24, 2007 Report Share Posted April 24, 2007 Aww MArtha said Jack was amazing He better get there on time:) I love this update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted April 24, 2007 Report Share Posted April 24, 2007 Ok Rach I no this looks scary from were you are. But seriously go any slower and this child will be born on this floor, and I really don’t want my child born on this floor!” she said Lol, can't believe I havent posted a comment yet, this is awesome and the quote above really captured Martha for me only one chapter left aye update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 Tony's such a legend What a classic remark! Finally got the chance to catch up with this fic! I had actually read the updates earlier on today, but didn't get chance to comment because my sister's damn laptop died on me Damn technology! I'm so glad Ava is ok *wipes brow in relief*. Corey is just a nasty piece of work; hope he rots in jail like he has been doing in the show Aww, not many chapters to go now...Jacky had better get a move on, if he knows whats good for him, he'll get there in time for the birth. I want it to be a boy. A baby boy Holden would just be the sweetest It would definately complete the family! Looking forward to the next update already! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted April 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2007 I want an update now soon Last time you updated *Looks*....was the 23rd! :o That was like 5 days ago! Update! Update! please.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*purple*star* Posted April 28, 2007 Report Share Posted April 28, 2007 OMG....I've just read the fic from the start and its absolutly brilliant!! Ava is so cute!! Please update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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