vale4eva Posted May 22, 2007 Report Share Posted May 22, 2007 You no, that was actually a really good chapter. Who ever the genius was who wrote it, bravo! Your welcome though! But you owe me! You owe me BIG!!! Hopefully the next one you'll be able to write youself More please (from YOU, not me lol) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted May 22, 2007 Report Share Posted May 22, 2007 Hey I did wrote some of it xxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 23, 2007 Report Share Posted May 23, 2007 Martha deverses to be unloved. HOw dare she give up such a beautiful baby like that. Maybe if you gave him a cuter name jks Poor Jacky. I just want to hug him Jacky is too nice to Martha, if i were him, i would be giving her the cold shoulder MOre please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted May 23, 2007 Report Share Posted May 23, 2007 omg! fantastic chapter please let it get better update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted May 23, 2007 Report Share Posted May 23, 2007 “Its ok daddy, don’t cry” she said as she gripped onto him tightly. Aww she's so cute! Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted May 23, 2007 Report Share Posted May 23, 2007 Your evil and mean and I hate you! Go away never talk to me again. Whay did you do that? They could have ben happy now the are both going to get depressed and everything is ruined Great writing, but I still hate you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted May 23, 2007 Report Share Posted May 23, 2007 Hey I did wrote some of it xxxxx Yeah, only like the first 10 lines Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 23, 2007 Report Share Posted May 23, 2007 I am gonna cry, Martha is a butt head, Jack is so gorge. Ava is cuter and Lewis is even cuter. Cute chapter from whoever wrote it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted May 24, 2007 Report Share Posted May 24, 2007 I am seriously not liking Martha atm. She's just making me go grrr! lol. Keep going. Make Jack leave her, and take Ava and Lewis. I really don't like her in this fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted May 24, 2007 Report Share Posted May 24, 2007 Awww, that was so touching Jack is such a sweetheart. He still has the sensitivity and understanding to try and help Martha; even if it means being away from his beloved son That was written excellently. I could see it from both Jack and Martha's perspective; very heart wrenching. Great, now I have to go revise feeling all emotional and glum; thanks Becky and Rachel Hope they all become a cute, little family soon. Update when you can! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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