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GReat chappy Becky :)

Ava cant be seriously injured after a slap can she?? But the poor baby :( Find Jacky and Martha and bring them to their baby. Ash, still hate him, but am thankful he turned himself in, and didnt hurt neither Jack or Martha.

More please :)

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I thought i commented on this earlier! :unsure: Obviously not huh...

Anyway, loved that chapter. But im slightly concerned for Ava :(

I actually appreciate Ashton in this fic, he's doing the right thing for once. :rolleyes:

I hope Cameron and Corey and Ashton go down for a really really really long time :angry:

Update soon :)

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Have read it all and I love! But Becky I say this in all your fics... why must you make me cry like so?

Great writing. I loved when Ava answered the phone at the station, she is sooo cute. I totally did not expect Cam, Ash and Corey that was such a great twist... Can't wait to see more!

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