gawguss_tiff Posted April 18, 2007 Report Share Posted April 18, 2007 i just reaqd the whole thing THE WHOLE thing lol which is a MASSIVE effort for me lol ... and its great i love it you didnt tell me you were doing another fic.... lol xoxoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted April 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 (edited) Aww.....She's awake Great chapter, Becky Loved it! Update soon! Oh and yes, Ava is really ok! Thanks for dedi Edited April 19, 2007 by laineyloo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted April 19, 2007 Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 Loved that chapter! Corey gets questioned by the police, Ava wakes up and Martha and Jack are still happily together! Happy days! What more could I want! Pitty you had to ruin it with the preview though Great chapter, more please Ps, thanks for the dedi, and your welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted April 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 Aww that chapter was so sute! Ava is so cute! Another baby holden! YAY! Keep the udpates coming Only 2 or 3 Maybe some more? Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted April 19, 2007 Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 Lucas was also in the distance watching the young couple but unfortunately Ava had seen him; this meant Lucas was going to have to swim with her now! “Uncle Luc” she shouted him over “Hello princess” he said as he picked her up and gave her a kiss as he put her down she started to strip to her costume “Come on Luc lets go” she shouted as she ran towards the water screaming as Lucas ran after her. “Hey granddad” she said as she ran towards the room were Lucas was with his girlfriend Rachel. “Well hello there princess” Luc said to her “Who’s this” she said looking at Rachel evilly Lucas has his arm wrapped around her and Ava was getting very jealous “Move over please” she said bluntly “What” Lucas said “I want to sit by you” Ava said “Well I best be going, I’ll talk to you later” Rachel said as she kissed him goodbye and walked out. ^^ Those bits crack me up everytime I read them! Avas threatend by me! Im sure she'l learn to love me, and im not going anywhere anytime soon, am I Becky! More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 20, 2007 Report Share Posted April 20, 2007 This is for my Aussie Friend Tasha - Missya!!!!!!!!! I miss you tooooooo Becky...Come back on line Great lots of chapter though. Im glad Ava is alright Corey is a loser. Poor Rach Hugh <3 Peter and Jack best mates Baby time, hehe!! More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted April 20, 2007 Report Share Posted April 20, 2007 Ava is so cute and protective Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 20, 2007 Report Share Posted April 20, 2007 Omg I had no net access and I was so excited that there was 1 update and then there was 2. Good jod redeaming yourself Beckyyou are safe now. Ava is such a little cutie. Glad you didn't kill her now? Only 2 more parts ? Owell I'm not worried you also said it was going to be a oneshot. Awesome updates. Can't wait for more and for Ava to get a little brother or sister. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted April 23, 2007 Report Share Posted April 23, 2007 Only just started reading this fic, andI just read itthe whole way through and it awesome. Cant believe thatyou nearly killed Ava, and Sam+Rach, i loved the chapter you wrotefor her Dont end this! i love teh fic Update sooon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted April 23, 2007 Report Share Posted April 23, 2007 Great updates, thanks god that Ava is okay! Damn that evil Corey! I liked that scene at the beach, I could just picture it! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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