*~Abi~* Posted April 4, 2007 Report Share Posted April 4, 2007 Amanda and martha thats quiet a dangerous combination!!!! whats Johnny going to do next > surely he's caused enough trouble by now wicked add hun love abi xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 Thanks for the great comments Amanda and martha thats quiet a dangerous combination!!!! Not at all LOL More will be on the way shortly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 Hey hope you enjoy this update CHAPTER 11 Fletcher residence (Sally is busy in the kitchen Brad enters with Pipa) BRAD: Morning Sal PIPPA: Morning mommy SALLY: Walks over to Brad give him a kiss Morning! PIPPA: Mommy kiss Laughs SALLY: Gives Pippa a kiss What do you want to drink? PIPPA: Milky mommy Smiles BRAD: Smiles at her That will make you nice and strong! PIPPA: Laughs out of her stomach I am strong! SALLY: Chuckles Yeah you are BRAD: I wonder where Rick, Mr Steward and Martha are. Stares at the staircase SALLY: I wonder She turns around and smiles at Brad and Pippa Somewhere near summer bay (The old abandoned factory it is a heaven for Johnny and His gang) JOHNNY: Where is he? Looks at Sam with an evil face SAM: I don’t know he should have been back by now Looks down the road to see if he doesn’t see him JOHNNY: He had better be here by noon! Walks away SAM: Shouts after Johnny He will be mate (a car pulls into the garage they have made there) SAM: Where have you been? ROCCO: The bay He walks off to where they keep Val JOHNNY: Meets Rocco outside the room where they keep Val Hey little brother about time you got here! Gives a smug smile ROCCO: Hey good to have you back mate! Smiles half unsure JOHNNY: We should get going ROCCO: I will watch Val JOHNNY: NO! His eye shoots daggers at Rocco I need you there for the plan to work SAM: Looks terified about the news he had just resieved The cops got Joe Looks scared about what Johnny will say JOHNNY: Okay lads pack up we need to move now Walks into Val’s room SAM: Looks into the room Where are we going? JOHNNY: Your place mate Smiles at Sam ROCCO: Let us go to my place in the City! JOHNNY: No ways the coppers there now Val very good Looks serious The police station (Peter is in the interrogation room with Joe) PETER: Right mate where were you off to? JOE: My house Smiles to Peter PETER: We know your part of Johnny’s gang JOE: No detective I am not Sits back in his chair and gives a smug smile PETER: Why did you have all that supplies in you car? Looks irritated with Joe JOE: Well I live far from the shops He smiles PETER: Do you live alone? Smiles JOE: Yes detective I do! PETER: Well in that case Smiles Are these for you? Laughs and holds up a box of tampons JOE: It is not mine! Looks angry You planted those PETER: Why would I do that? Laughs Well I think it gives me a reason to search your home! Smiles and walks out laughing JACK: What now mate? Asks all smiley PETER: If he is related to Johnny’s gang Scratches his chin Then we will charge him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*~Abi~* Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 wicked add hun bless Pippa and brad he's so sweet with her. Go Peter i Detc mode again love this one xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 It is just my pleasure Tnx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 wicked add hun bless Pippa and brad he's so sweet with her. Go Peter in Detc mode again love this one xxx yeh thats what i was thinking, but also! Go Jacky! lol Great chapter again How much of a cutie is pippa though! I keep picturing her like the new hna one, and shes sooooo cute!!!! Love this More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 Great chapter Find Val Jacky. Rocco wants to set her free doesnt he??? More please, with Martha and Amanda Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 More please, with Martha and Amanda There is more on the way don't warry Thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 PETER: Well in that case Smiles Are these for you? Laughs and holds up a box of tampons Um... I get really bad nosebleeds? Lol. Good update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted April 9, 2007 Report Share Posted April 9, 2007 Thanks to all for the replies Here is my next update hope you like it CHAPTER 12 Somewhere near Summer Bay (Johnny, Sam, Rocco and Max) JOHNNY: Get a move on mates Looks at the road The coppers might be here any minute ROCCO: Will He tell the cops he is in the gang? MAX: I hope he has more brains then that Sighs and start moving some of the stuff JOHNNY: Sighs Get a move on lads we still have to get Val and get out of here as soon as possible! Shakes his head and re enter the room where they hold Val as prisoner ROCCO: Johnny do you need a hand mate? Gives a smile as he sees Johnny kneel by Val’s side (Inside the room) VALERIE: Leave me alone Johnny! Bites Johnny on his arm JOHNNY: Bitch Pushes Val off his arm VALERIE: I swear…. JOHNNY: What do you swear? Teases her VALERIE: The cops will find you Johnny! Smirks at him JOHNNY: Will they now! Laughs at her statement And how would that be? VALERIE: Moves backwards Leave ma alone Johnny Looks scared JOHNNY: Pules Val up by her arm Come on get moving Pushes her forward out of the room VALERIE: Let me go you mongrel Pules herself loose from Johnny’s grip SAM: Nice of you to join us Laughs VALERIE: You’re just as charming as always Gives him the cold shoulder SAM: I almost feel flattered Laughs and takes her to his car VALERIE: I’m not driving in the same car as this idiot Turns her back on him JOHNNY: Well you don’t have a choice Smiles evilly at her VALERIE: I won’t get into the car! She sees how Sam pours something onto a cloth SAM: Walks to Val Sleep tight! Puts the cloth over Val’s nose and she passes out JOHNNY: Put her in the back of the truck behind all the stuff Smiles as he thinks about his plan SAM: And if the coppers stop me on the way to the new hide out? Looks at Johnny for help JOHNNY: Then you say your taking Rocco to school Smiles with an evil twinkle in his eye Summer Bay High – Sally’s classroom SALLY: Okay every body Looks at Rocco’s empty chair Where is Mr Cooper? DREW: Late as always Rolls his eyes at Belle who starts laughing SALLY: What is so funny Belle? Tries not to laugh, as she wants to be serious BELLE: Nothing Ms Fletcher I’m sorry Gets another smile, but she swallows it SALLY: That’s okay I saw what Mr Curtis was up to She smiles at Cassie who is trying to hold in her laugh DREW: Sorry Ms Fletcher, It won’t happen again Sits up straight in his chair SALLY: Apology accepted She smiles at Drew and Belle CASSIE: Who started the revolution? Tries to get the class back on track SALLY; The…. (Brad enters the classroom) BRAD: Ms Fletcher can I see you in my office please? Smiles to Sally as if he had something on his mind CASSIE: Mr Armstrong we are in the middle of a class She teases him BRAD: Well Ms Turner you can get extra classes at home! Smiles at Cassie, as she knows what he is up to CASSIE: But.. SALLY: Now Cass, Smiles at Cassie Class excuse me for just a moment Glares at Cassie Behave! (Sally exits the class and Cassie starts telling Belle and Matilda all about Brad’s plans) Summer Bay Hospital – Mitzi’s room (Peter enters her room) PETER’S THOUGHTS What the hell did you do? Sighs Why were you shot? Stares at her as she lies there so motionless Wake up! He checks her life support (All of the sudden she flat lines) PETER: What the hell did I do? (Rachel comes storming in) RACHEL: What happened? Looks at Peter PETER: I was sitting here and then… RACHEL: I’m gonna have to ask you to leave Peter PETER: Okay I’ll wait outside (Peter exits Mitzi’s room and goes and sits on a chair right across the door) (After about 10minits Rachel emerges from her room) RACHEL: She is okay Gives a big smile PETER: Thank heavens! Gives a smile of relieve Will she wake up? RACHEL: We thought so this morning so opened her eyes for just a bit and then she went under again. Sighs PETER: I never knew a gunshot could do all that! RACHEL: Well she had lost a great amount of blood and her body has to recover from that shock! Looks into Mitzi's room and sighs PETER: Let me know the moment she wakes up. RACHEL: Sure Peter will do! PETER: Thanks Rachel (Peter exits) The Diner (Martha and Amanda enters) AMANDA: We should do this more often! Thinks back to the night they had last night watching movies and drinking wine MARTHA: Yes we should it was loads of fun Chuckles COLLEEN: Morning loves! Smiling at the two looking so cheerfull MARTHA: Morning Colleen! AMANDA: Colleen COLLEEN: So what can I get you? AMANDA: Coffee and a muffin please Colleen MARTHA: Same for me please Smiles as Colleen walks away to place the order AMANDA: Has Jack spoken to yo since? Looks for a answer in her eyes MARTHA: No, has Belle spoken to you? Tries to be as tactful as possible AMANDA: I wish, other then saying bad things to me she doesn’t want to speak to me Looks depressed (Over at the counter Irene and Leah are chatting about these two and their sudden friendship) IRENE: I wonder when they decided to become friends? Looks at the two of them chatting away LEAH: I have no idea, but at least the both stay out of trouble Chuckles IRENE For now yes Chuckles IRENE: Let’s hope they will Laughs and take Amanda and Martha’s order to them Here you go AMANDA: Thank yo Irene it looks great MARTHA: Yeah it does thanks IRENE: It’s a pleasure Smiles at them and walks back to Leah Both of them has gotten friendlier Chuckles LEAH: That’s one good thing about their friendship Stares at them from a distance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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