Amanda Vale Posted April 19, 2007 Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 Thanks for the great comments guys sorry for the short update im running short of time the unpacking is taking up most of my time. Will have anothe one soon take care CHAPTER 14 Johnny’s revenge In this chapter Johnny terrorizes the bay and all its residence Summer Bay Hospital Martha is still asleep on Mitzi’s bed when she is awakened by a noise coming from outside in the hallway MARTHA: Awakens and looks around the room Hello! She stands up from the chair that she is sitting on Is anybody there? walks out of the room into the main corridor Hello Walks around the corner and sees a dark figure in the side of her eye Hey you! She walks further away from Mitzi’s room giving Johnny the opertunity he has been waiting for JOHNNY: Walks into Mitzi’s room with a smug look on his face I’ve got you now sweetheart He smirks at her How does it feel to know your going to die? He smiles then reaches over to her machine cables Sleep tight He kisses her on the fore head and unplugs the cable, he leaves the room and exits the building MARTHA: When she sees nothing she returns to Mitzi’s room Mitzi! She exclaims (Rachel enters) RACHEL: Sees Martha standing next to Mitzi’s bed What the hell have you done? Looks at Martha standing there all shocked MARTHA: Looks at Rachel all confused Nothing I swear I went out and when I came back her machines were dead RACHEL: So you expect me to believe you had nothing to do with this? MARTHA: It is the truth Looks at Rachel Why would I want to kill Mitzi? (Nurses comes storming into Mitzi’s room) RACHEL: You had better wait outside until the police gets here Fletcher residence Brad and Sally is sitting on the couch when Brad hears a noise outside SALLY: What was that? She looks at Brad BRAD: I’ll go and check it out Stands up to check it out SALLY: Brad be careful RICK: (enters) Brad I’ll go with you BRAD: Okay where is Matilda? RICK: She is upstairs in my room! SALLY: I’ll go and get her BRAD: Good idea RICK: We saw a black SUV driving around earlier BRAD: Me two, I’m worried it might be a member of Johnny’s gang SALLY: What would they want in the bay? RICK: Trouble that’s for sure Looks up the stairs MATILDA: Did you hear? Looks at eveyone in the room she ia as plale as a sheet BRAD: Looks at her in a funny way Hear what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted April 19, 2007 Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 Poor Martha, having to deal with that Martha would never hurt a sole! How can Rachel think she'd do that! Hmm, wonder what Maddie heard!? Great chapter, more soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 19, 2007 Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 OMG i cant beleive Rachel didnt beleive Martha. I hate her Haha, now Jack is going to come and he'll see Martha Please let Jack come Great chapter. Johnny sucks. Nothing better happen to Brad and Ric. More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted April 19, 2007 Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 Thanks for the comments i apreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 19, 2007 Report Share Posted April 19, 2007 Oh I love Rachel. I love Johnny even more - go Johnny, go! Create misery! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted April 21, 2007 Report Share Posted April 21, 2007 Im really mad. at myself for missiing all these updates No Rocco, stop being a gang member. and poor Martha, evil Rachel blaming her. Update soon this is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*~Abi~* Posted April 21, 2007 Report Share Posted April 21, 2007 I hope they catch johnny soon , I wonder what Mattie heard?? fab as always xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 29, 2007 Report Share Posted April 29, 2007 Hey guys! Just a little message from Hanli - poor girl is stuck without Internet for a while, she didn't forget about this though! Not sure when she'll be back though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted May 29, 2007 Report Share Posted May 29, 2007 Hey guys here is another update i dedicate this update to my best friend Liz aka Sally Fletcher Liz die ene is spesiaal vir jou net vir jou vermaak!!!!!!! CHAPTER 15 PART 1 JOHNNY'S REVENGE PART 2 Fletcher residence RICK: Matty what did you hear? MATILDA: Pauses for a moment then starts to mutter softly Joh... something about Johnny! BRAD: What? SALLY: What about him? MATILDA: They talked about him... There is some fear in her voice RICK: Who said it? MATILDA: Two men that stood under your window BRAD: Come Rick let's go and see who those two men are! RICK: Yeah let's get going Picks up his jacked from the chair and heads out the door with Brad SALLY: Be carefull.. MATILDA: I'm scared for them Sal SALLY: Embraces Matty in her arms They will be fine The Hospital RACHEL: Emerges from Mitzi's room Martha MARTHA: Looks up at her from the chair on what she is sitting on Y...Yes RACHEL: Mitzi is stable but the cops wil be here soon to talk to you MARTHA: But, like I said before I did nothing wrong RACHEL: It is onley a formality, and you were the onley one here so what was I supposed to do? MARTHA: You could have believed me RACHEL: I do, but... MARTHA: But you think im the one who did it Just outside Summerbay Johnny emerges from a bucsh behind Sam and Rocco who is waiting there for him JOHNNY: Did you miss me Chuckles ROCCO: Johnny you gave me a fright SAM: Is it done? JOHNNY: I said i will do it so what needed to be done is done Smirks at them ROCCO: We did what you asked us to do! JOHNNY: Brad Armstrong will be sorry he was born when I'm finished with him SAM: Laughs I would be if I was him JOHNNY: What are we waiting for then let's get going ROCCO: What if they see me? JOHNNY: Relax Rocc we will be wairing hoods SAM: If they see you it's over Johnny JOHNNY: You should relax aswell Sam they wount Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted May 29, 2007 Report Share Posted May 29, 2007 Hey guys here is another update i dedicate this update to my best friend Liz aka Sally Fletcher Liz die ene is spesiaal vir jou net vir jou vermaak!!!!!!! CHAPTER 15 PART 1 JOHNNY'S REVENGE PART 2 Fletcher residence RICK: Matty what did you hear? MATILDA: Pauses for a moment then starts to mutter softly Joh... something about Johnny! BRAD: What? SALLY: What about him? MATILDA: They talked about him... There is some fear in her voice RICK: Who said it? MATILDA: Two men that stood under your window BRAD: Come Rick let's go and see who those two men are! RICK: Yeah let's get going Picks up his jacked from the chair and heads out the door with Brad SALLY: Be carefull.. MATILDA: I'm scared for them Sal SALLY: Embraces Matty in her arms They will be fine The Hospital RACHEL: Emerges from Mitzi's room Martha MARTHA: Looks up at her from the chair on what she is sitting on Y...Yes RACHEL: Mitzi is stable but the cops wil be here soon to talk to you MARTHA: But, like I said before I did nothing wrong RACHEL: It is onley a formality, and you were the onley one here so what was I supposed to do? MARTHA: You could have believed me RACHEL: I do, but... MARTHA: But you think im the one who did it Just outside Summerbay Johnny emerges from a bucsh behind Sam and Rocco who is waiting there for him JOHNNY: Did you miss me Chuckles ROCCO: Johnny you gave me a fright SAM: Is it done? JOHNNY: I said i will do it so what needed to be done is done Smirks at them ROCCO: We did what you asked us to do! JOHNNY: Brad Armstrong will be sorry he was born when I'm finished with him SAM: Laughs I would be if I was him JOHNNY: What are we waiting for then let's get going ROCCO: What if they see me? JOHNNY: Relax Rocc we will be wairing hoods SAM: If they see you it's over Johnny JOHNNY: You should relax aswell Sam they wount Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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