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Hey guys!!

It's been a long time coming so here is my next update

Sorry for the time delay

This Chapter is dedicated to my Grand mother that passed away this morning. She was my insiration to complete this fic. She will be missed by many, but she had 86 wonderfull years alive :wub:

Thanks goes to God who spared her this long!!

All glory to God!!

CHAPTER 15 PART 2

JOHNNY’S REVENGE PART 3

The hospital

(Outside Mitzi’s room)

MARTHA:

You should know me better then that Rachel!

(Looks very angry when talking to Rachel)

RACHEL:

Martha this doesn’t look good...

(Says calmly)

MARTHA:

So you’re just going to tell Jack I did this.

(Snapping at Rachel)

RACHEL:

I have no choice really if I could I wouldn’t tell Jack at all.

(Trying to reason with Martha)

MARTHA

Jack won’t believe I did this, Wait until Brad and Sally hear you’re putting this all on me…

(Gives a sigh)

I’m innocent!!

(Turns around and go and sit on the chair again to wait for the cops)

Somewhere near Summer Bay

(Sam’s House)

SAM:

(Opens the truck at the back to let Johnny and Valerie out)

You alright mate?

JOHNNY:

(Gives a smirk)

Never better...

SAM:

(Looks around)

We should be safe here for a while at least.

JOHNNY:

Help me get her out?

(Sam and Johnny drag her out of the truck, then Johnny picks her up and troughs her over his shoulder)

Get the door!

(They walk through the house towards the cellar and put Val on an old blanket, then wake her up.)

Rise and shine sweetheart.

VALERIE:

Bastards!!

(Stands up and look Johnny and Sam in the face)

You will be very sorry you ever came near me!

JOHNNY:

(Smirks at Val)

And why is that Val?

(Looks serious)

You listen to me...

SAM:

Johnny we need to go and hide the truck!

JOHNNY:

We will have our little chat later on...

(Slams the door in Val’s face and locks to door behind him)

VALERIE:

I hate you Johnny Cooper

(She sits down on the blanket and starts to cry)

I hate you!!

(Shouts after Johnny)

Summer Bay Police Station

(Peter’s office)

PETER:

Jack we need to find Val as soon as possible.

(Sits back in his chair)

JACK:

I know Peter but where do we start looking?

(Gives a sigh)

PETER:

Joe!

(Gets a smile on his face)

JACK:

Why?

(Frowns at Peter’s statement)

PETER:

He was hiding something; I don’t think those tampons were for him!

(Chuckles)

JACK:

Wait a minute, he is a member of Johnny’s gang!

(Gives a frown)

PETER:

Yes, he is

JACK:

Why look into Johnny’s gang for this?

(He looks puzzled)

PETER:

(Rubs his hands over his hair)

I found out today Jack

(Gives a sigh)

You know that prisoner that was released for good behavior from the prison in the city?

JACK:

Yes!

(Looks puzzled)

PETER:

That prisoner is Johnny Cooper!!

JACK:

Good behavior?

(Gives a sigh)

Johnny?

(scratches his head)

How is that possible?

Fletcher residence

SALLY:

Brad!

BRAD:

Yes Sal

(Looks at her with love in his eyes)

SALLY:

Will you go with me when I go and visit Mitzi at the hospital?

(Her eyes lighting up)

BRAD:

Yes sure, Cassie or Rick just has to baby sit Pippa!

CASSIE:

(Enters through the back door)

Hey Sal, Brad!

BRAD:

Hey Cassie

SALLY:

Cassie

(Looks at Brad then at Cassie)

CASSIE:

Why are you looking at me like that?

BRAD:

(Smiles at Cassie)

Will you look after Pippa while we go to the hospital?

CASSIE:

Yes sure where is she?

SALLY:

Upstairs sleeping

Holden/Hunter Residence

(Rick and Matilda enter)

MATILDA:

What do you want to do today?

RICK:

We could go for a swim...

BETH:

Brad said you had an incident at the house last night!

RICK:

Yes, Matilda heard two guys talking about Johnny

(Scratches His head)

Then I and Brad went looking for them

BETH:

You should be more careful, they could have killed you

MATILDA:

Mum is right

RICK:

I promise to talk to Brad about what we did...

(Tries to look serious)

BETH:

Good then

(She tries to sound angry, but her laughs get the better of her)

The Diner

(Amanda enter)

COLLEEN:

Hey Amanda what can I get you?

AMANDA:

A coffee an d a muffin please

(Looks at her watch)

Colleen have you seen Martha today?

COLLEEN:

No, I haven’t seen her she didn’t come home last night.

IRENE:

Colleen table two is waiting for their orders

(Evil eye’s Colleen)

Sorry about that, You looking for Martha?

AMANDA:

Yes she was supposed to meet me here

IRENE:

Well I haven’t seen her

AMANDA:

Thank you Irene

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Hey guys here is my next update, sorry it took me so long to add it

CHAPTER 16 Part 1

Summer Bay High

(Main corridor)

BELLE:

Why was Mr. Armstrong covered in blood yesterday?

CASSIE:

The new teacher Ms West was shot!

DREW:

What, what happened...? Who would do something like that?

(Trying to think about who could have done it)

MATILDA:

A mad person that’s for sure

(Giggling after she had made the statement)

LUCAS:

If Johnny Cooper wasn’t in jail I would say he did it, or at the least had something to do with what happened. Only he would do something like that

(Looking pretty disgusted as he shakes his head)

ROCCO:

(Standing behind his friends as they talked about Johnny his brother like that made him regret that he has to lie to them to protect his brother, but he had no choice if he dishonored his brother he would get rid of him)

Like you said...! My brother is in jail

(Looks down to the ground so that they won’t notice that he is lying to them)

LUCAS:

Sorry Rocco, I didn’t see you there

(Drooping his head and feels he could kick himself in the guts for saying that)

ROCCO:

(Forces a smile to his face)

That’s alright mate, no harm done

DREW:

Rocco

ROCCO:

Yes Drew

(Feels that he may be put on the spot again but puts a smile on his face)

DREW:

Who do you think shot Ms. West?

(Trying to test what Rocco knows by asking that question)

BELLE:

You’re out of line Drew

(Frowns when she looks at Drew)

CASSIE:

You don’t have to answer the question Rocco

(Looking into his eyes trying to persuade him)

ROCCO:

No that’s alright I’ll answer the question!

(Feeling half worried about what he is going to say another lie?)

Could be anyone!

(Swallows his pride)

It could have been by accident, or that she was at the wrong place at the wrong time

(Realizing what he had just said he quickly thought of something else to add to his bizarre answer)

Or it could be one of the many enemies of her brother who wanted her dead

(Trying his bets to get them off Johnny’s trail)

CASSIE:

But why would someone do something like that? And hurt Ms. West she is such a nice person.

(Thinking back to the day she met Mitzi for the first time)

ROCCO:

I really don’t know!

(Feeling good for keeping the others of his brother’s trail. But also feels bad for lying to his friends)

DREW:

That person or people who did it are totally gutless and demented!

(Half smiling as he makes his statement)

ROCCO:

And why would you say so

(Feels worried as if Drew knows he is hiding something)

BELLE:

I think what Drew was trying to say was; that he doesn’t know how anyone could do such a thing to Ms. West and also kidnap a cop!

(Shooting daggers at Drew with her eyes)

ROCCO:

What cop?

(Trying to sound concerned about Val, even though he knows it is her)

MATILDA:

Valerie Scot, she is new in the bay

Summer Bay Hospital

JACK:

(Jack and Peter enter the hospital making their way to Mizi’s room whilst talking along the way)

Who is the person that turned off Mitzi’s machines?

PETER:

Rachel said Martha, was in the room when she got there after the alarm went off...

JACK:

Martha? She wouldn’t

PETER:

I know Jack...

(Thinks for a moment)

Let’s hear what Martha has to say

MARTHA:

(Stands up as she sees Jack and Peter walking down the hall coming closer to where she is.)

Jack I swear I didn’t do it...

PETER:

Calm down Martha!

(Smiles at her, trying to put her mind at ease)

RACHEL:

(Emerges from Mitzi’s room, not noticing Jack and Peter)

Martha, Mitzi’s vital signs are stable, and we expect her to regain conciseness soon.

(Looks up and sees Peter and Jack)

Hey guys, sorry I didn’t see you

PETER:

Rachel

(Gives her a polite nod)

JACK:

Hey Rachel

(Gives a nod)

PETER:

Rachel, I’ll have Fitzy come over and check on Mitzi later on.

(Sighs)

But right now we will take Martha with us and question her at the station.

RACHEL:

Its fine and I’ll let you know as soon as she wakes up.

MARTHA:

Are you arresting me?

JACK:

No, you’re only going to the station for questioning, and to get your statement.

PETER:

If you had nothing to do with it, you will also need a place to stay until we get who ever did it.

(Looks at Martha and frowns)

AMANDA:

She can stay with me Peter

PETER:

(Turns around with a frown on his face)

If it’s fine with Martha, sure

MARTHA:

Thank you Amanda that would be great

AMANDA:

No problem.

(Smiles at Peter)

PETER:

(Takes Amanda by her arm and leads her to the side)

Since when do you care for anyone other then yourself?

AMANDA:

(Looks surprised)

What do you mean, I care I care a...

PETER:

Yeah... like you cared for Belle when you slept with Drew!

(Looks angry)

AMANDA:

That was a mistake Peter

PETER:

What about Dan...

AMANDA:

That’s not fair Peter

MARTHA:

(Walks to Peter and Amanda)

Now is neither the time nor place for this.

PETER:

(Looks straight at Amanda)

Well talk about this later

JACK:

Let’s go Peter...

MARTHA:

(Stands there looking at Amanda as she walks away, proud but bruised)

Amanda wait...

AMANDA:

(turns around and waits for Martha)

Thank you Martha

MARTHA:

No problem, what are friends for.

(Martha and Amanda walks behind Peter and Jack to the car park of the hospital. They stop at the police car and as Jack is opening the backdoor of the car for Martha they see a black suv spinning away)

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Hey guys!

Thanks for the comments.

Here is my next update hope you enjoy this one

<_<

CHAPTER 16 PART 2

Sam’s house

(The basement)

JOHNNY:

Come on Val...

(Smirks at her)

VALERIE:

Leave me alone Cooper

(Turns her head away from him)

JOHNNY:

(Grabs her chin and turns her so that she faces him)

Where is he?

(Still holding her chin in his hand)

VALERIE:

How would I know?

(Pretending not to be scared)

JOHNNY:

You know what I will do if you don’t tell me!

(Threatening her)

VALERIE:

I’m not scared of you...

(Looking him straight into the eyes, holing her fear in her head)

JOHNNY:

You always where and always will be love...

(Laughing in her face)

VALERIE:

My mother didn’t raise children ever to be scared of anyone or anything.

(Mocking him)

JOHNNY:

Well love in that case she failed

(Smirking at her)

Don’t play games with me!

VALERIE:

(Looks him straight in the eye)

I’m not playing anything

JOHNNY:

Like hell your not

(Glaring into her eyes)

Pitty you’re no good at them

VALERIE:

And you would know?

(Challenging him)

JOHNNY:

You’re asking for it...

VALERIE:

(Stands up)

Don’t make me wait to long Cooper

(Trying her best not to show fear)

JOHNNY:

(Pulls a knife out of his pocket and holds it against her neck)

Don’t dare me sweetheart...

(Takes the knife away and points it at her)

VALERIE

I wasn’t you jerk off

(Looking at him with fear in her eyes)

JOHNNY:

(Glaring at her)

I’ll get you...

(Turns around walks out the door and locks it)

VALERIE:

(Starts crying)

I hope someone will find me

(Muttering to herself in her hands)

It’s just like the last time Johnny will.....

(Sobs too much to get anything out)

Summer Bay Hospital

(Car park)

JACK:

What was that all about?

AMANDA:

I’ve seen that SUV before, about 3days ago it was driving all around the bay

MARTHA:

I think I’ve also seen it before

PETER:

Guys it’s only an SUV

(Puts his hands on his hips)

I’m sure there are plenty of them in the Bay

AMANDA:

I have only seen that one

PETER:

To how much do you pay attention to anyway Amanda?

(Snapping at her)

You are selfish and steps on everyone else’s feelings, in short you just don’t have a heart.

(Turns around and gets into the police car)

AMANDA:

I do have a heart Peter Baker you will see!

(Smirks at Peter)

See you at the station Martha; I’m just going to make a quick stop at home to get you something warmer to wear

MARTHA:

Thank you Amanda see you there

Summer Bay Police station

(Peter, Jack and Martha enter)

MARTHA:

Why is taking Amanda so long to get here

PETER:

She said she’s going to go home first

(Takes of his hat and puts it down on Jack’s desk)

FITZY:

Thank goodness you’re back

(She looks worried)

PETER:

What’s wrong Lara?

(Doesn’t understand why she would be so glad to see him)

FITZY:

I’m afraid I have some bad news

(Her eyes look troubled)

PETER:

What is it Fitzy?

(Looks puzzled)

FITZI:

I’m afraid there has been an accident on the Yabbi Creek road

MARTHA:

That’s the way Amanda drove home!

PETER:

(Puts his hand on Martha’s shoulder)

I’m sure Amanda is fine

FITZY:

Peter the call was urgent

(Tries to hurry him)

PETER:

Jack, let’s go and have a look at what happened there!

(Grabs his hat of the desk and heads for the door)

JACK:

Okay

(Places his hat on his head and follow Peter out the door)

MARTHA:

Why isn’t Amanda here yet?

(Looks nervous)

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