Roccoluver Posted April 1, 2007 Report Share Posted April 1, 2007 loved this update, Doctor Tyler aye?, oh Ric and Matilda make such a sweet couple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 1, 2007 Report Share Posted April 1, 2007 Nice part. Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted April 1, 2007 Report Share Posted April 1, 2007 ooooo great post. ric is so sweet Dr Tyler? interesting Loved it!! update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liska Posted April 1, 2007 Report Share Posted April 1, 2007 Ric and Matilda are so cute!! Great update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sazcaz89 Posted April 1, 2007 Report Share Posted April 1, 2007 I hope Jack and Fitzy are going to be ok!!! MAtilda and Ric are so cute together! Please update soon!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*~Abi~* Posted April 1, 2007 Report Share Posted April 1, 2007 wicked up date hope jack and lara are going to be ok, and bless mattie and ric there so sweet together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 11, 2007 Report Share Posted April 11, 2007 Thanks for all the feedback guys! Here is an update: IN THE HOSPITAL Martha is sitting on a chair, waiting for someone to come out. She jumps up when nurse Julie does. MARTHA: Where's Jack? JULIE: Room 6, he's fine. MARTHA: That's great! And Fitzy? JULIE: Still in theatre. Martha sits down again as Julie leaves. THEATRE: TYLER: And done... Good job everyone. NURSE: Thank you, doctor. You too. TYLER: I think... The machine makes that dreadful peep sound and Tyler looks at Fitzy in horror. TYLER: She's arresting, get me oxygen! The nurse pass him oxygen. They look at each other in fear as he prepares to shock her back to life. FLETCHER HOUSE Peter and Sally are sitting on the couch. Peter is holding Sally. PETER: I've I'd just realized that something was wrong... SALLY: Peter, there's nothing you could have done. PETER: But... SALLY: Stop blaming yourself for the accident! And for not figuring out what Jack was trying to say. None of this is your fault, okay? PETER: Yeah. SALLY: Stop that! PETER: What? SALLY: You're still thinking that you could have done something! PETER: But maybe I could have. If I figured out what he was trying to say... SALLY: Tyler was there before us, and even if you did figure it out, he would still have been there before us! Come on, Pete... You know there was nothing you could have done. PETER: Yeah... I guess you're right. SALLY: What are you talking about, I'm always right! They kiss. Mattie and Ric come in. RIC: Hey hey! SALLY: Oh... hi guys. RIC: Sal... there is something that Mattie and I want to talk to you about. SALLY: Okay... MATTIE: Just... don't freak out or anything but... RIC: We decided to get married. IN HOSPITAL. JACK'S ROOM. Jack is lying in his bed, staring at the ceiling. Tyler comes in. TYLER: How are you? JACK: Fine. Where's Fitzy? TYLER: I'm sorry mate... She... she didn't make it. JACK: What? TYLER: She arrested on the operating table and we couldn't bring her back. We tried everything... I'm really sorry. JACK: Get out. TYLER: Mate... JACK: Just leave! Tyler nods and leaves. Martha comes in. Jack doesn't even look at her. She rushes forward and grabs his hand. MARTHA: Jack! I'm so glad you're all right! He ignores her and she frowns a little. MARTHA: When I heard... I was so scared! You know how much I still love you, Jack. JACK: Get out. MARTHA: What? JACK: Fitzy just died! And here you are telling me that you love me? MARTHA: Jack I didn't know... JACK: What? Did you expect me to forget about everything that's happened? MARTHA; No... JACK: I never want to see you again! Just go! Martha starts crying and runs out. IRENE'S HOUSE. There is a knock on the door. She walks forward to open it. HOLDEN HOUSE Tony is sitting in the living room. Emma is sitting next to him. EMMA: Give her time, Tony. I'm sure she'll come round. It's pregnancy hormones. TONY: I don't know, Em. It feels like I don't know her anymore. She's like a daughter to me and now... EMMA: Look, try and talk to her again. Just... TONY: What? EMMA: Be more supportive. TONY: She's having a child at sixteen! How can I support that? EMMA: Look, I know it's not ideal. But at least they are trying to do the right thing now. Just give them a chance, okay? ON THE BEACH. Martha is running forward. She falls down on the sand crying. She looks up when she feels a warm hand on her shoulder. MARTHA: Tash! You're back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liska Posted April 11, 2007 Report Share Posted April 11, 2007 Great chapter!! Tasha is back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clarky24 Posted April 11, 2007 Report Share Posted April 11, 2007 Great update. I hope Jack is going to cope with Fitzy's death ok. He seems to be pushing everyone away. Im glad Tasha has come back and it will be interesting to find out what brings her back to the bay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted April 11, 2007 Report Share Posted April 11, 2007 Poor Jack, even poorer Fitzy . Tasha's back Matilda and Ric getting married Tony being unsupportive Great update, needs more Rocco Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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