Zetti Posted March 2, 2007 Report Share Posted March 2, 2007 Awesome! More soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted March 2, 2007 Report Share Posted March 2, 2007 Crikey! They really don't waste time. Must be the uniform I still don't feel sorry for Zoe (I have stalker image) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted March 3, 2007 Report Share Posted March 3, 2007 Well at least Jack didnt lie to Martha saying he did break up with Zoe. His just lying to Zoe, but who cares about her As long as Martha is happy, im happy Great chapter More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted March 3, 2007 Report Share Posted March 3, 2007 Crikey! They really don't waste time. Must be the uniform I still don't feel sorry for Zoe (I have stalker image) Lol...I may need to change the name xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted March 4, 2007 Report Share Posted March 4, 2007 Jack better tell Zoe or i will kick his arse lol ... that was a great chapter update ASAP xoxox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarahandkatie Posted March 4, 2007 Report Share Posted March 4, 2007 OMG I have not read this fic in ages just caught up now, hooked as always update soon chicken!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 Thanks for the replies guys...Enjoy! __ Three days later. "Morning." Jack heard as a pair of smooth hands wrapped themselves around his body. "Hey. Morning to you too." He smiled as he put his hands on top of Martha's. "This has been great." She told him. "Yeah I know. But you know I have to go tonight." He told her. "Tonight?" She asked shocked. "Can't you stay one for night?" She pouted. Jack laughed as she placed herself on his lap. "You know if I could then I would. But I still got to tell Zoe." He reminded her. Martha sighed. "Ok." = Later on that morning. "Wow, look at that dress Jack." Martha gazed over to a dress in the window opposite. It was cream and imbroidered. It had a black removable belt which looked amzing on the dress its self. "Remind me never to go shopping with you again." He sighed as Martha pulled him over to the shop. = "Zoe, I'm home." Jack called. "In here." She called back. As Jack made his way into his bedroom, he saw Zoe packing. "Whats going on?" He asked. "I'm moving out." She told him simply. "Why?" He asked. "Because I found out that you're with another f*****g woman." She shouted. "What?" Jack asked. "Don't play with me like that Jack. I know that you're having an affair with someone." She shouted, a single tear rolling down her cheek. "And who told you this then?" He asked sarcasticly. "No wait-Let me guess. Was it Fraser?" "What does it matter who it was?" She asked. "Of course it does!" He shouted. "So was it Fraser?" "Yes alright it was Fraser." She told him. "But why would he lie?" "You know why. Because he fancies you!" He shouted. "He always had done. You know he's trying to break us up. And you know what he succeeded." He shouted as he walked out of the room. "Jack." Zoe shouted. "Jack." But had gone. ____ Please comment...xx:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 You should have just made Jack split up with her, plain and simple but no u have to make it more complicated! Just for that i am not gonna make a good thing happen in my fic! Naughty Fuj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 Jack and Martha can now be together Great chapter hun Update soon x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 Great chapter Fuj. But im not sure i agree with Jacks actions in this fic. He wants to end it with zoe yet he never seems to tell her about Martha, he's been given so many chances but still he goes on stringing her along, now Zoe's going to end up running after Jack and theyl get back together! Im starting to think maybe he wants to have his cake and eat it to, if you no what i mean! Or maybe im just paranoid. Maybe JnM will finally be together and Zoe will be out of the picture for good! Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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