Eden Posted November 17, 2006 Report Posted November 17, 2006 Awww! That's sweet! Ella is so cute! That was great! Liked the way you wrote it, with the description of everything! Quote
emmasi Posted November 17, 2006 Report Posted November 17, 2006 Yeah, it's just over a page. I was sort of thinking of it like a picture book, which is why there's the childlike discriptions, and why it's so simple and to the point. If that makes sense. Maybe I should change the names and whack some pictures in there and try to sell it Thanks for the reviews Quote
Adia Posted November 17, 2006 Report Posted November 17, 2006 What a great story. I love how cute Ella was about everything! I agree with Eden, the description and everything was really good. Loved it! Quote
Inactive User Posted November 17, 2006 Report Posted November 17, 2006 Awww that's so sweet! Update soon, Emma. Ella is so cute. I loved how Robbie bonded with her on the show like she is his own child and accepted her. Quote
*belle* Posted November 18, 2006 Report Posted November 18, 2006 Yeah it was brilliant emmasi. Ella was really cute and you could tell how hard Robbie was trying, it was very sweet. Well done Quote
Cerise Posted November 18, 2006 Report Posted November 18, 2006 Yeah, it's just over a page. I was sort of thinking of it like a picture book, which is why there's the childlike discriptions, and why it's so simple and to the point. If that makes sense. Maybe I should change the names and whack some pictures in there and try to sell it Thanks for the reviews You should totally do it It was so cute Quote
-Laura- Posted November 29, 2006 Report Posted November 29, 2006 Aww! That was really cute! I loved it! As others have said short but sweet! lol Great work! Quote
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