Sal_gurl Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Please post more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 that's great please post more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_jessik Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 OMG!!! yay the boss finally believed him. Hurry up & get in there Jack & bust Martha out from the freaky boy. lol Thanks for the update bay_girl! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Martha you clever, clever girl. Don't worry, everyone loves you, they won't call you names:P This was my favourite bit: You better watch out Corey, Jack said to himself. Because if you’ve even touched Martha, I’ll kill you. Ha ha, I'm going to love it when Jack sees Corey and the marks he has left on Martha!!!!!!!!! Well done Bay girl, i loved that chapter. Please update soon as the suspence is killing me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Love this story!. Jacks going to kick Corey's ass when he sees what he has done to Martha (can't wait)lol Well done Martha letting them know it was Corey (no-one will blame you or call you bad names). Hope they rescue Martha and Irene soon. Please update soon your an amazing write and this story is brill. xsianx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Brilliant story. I cant wait for Jack and Martha to be reunited and declare there love for each other, and of course Jack kicing Corey's butt. Post more soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bell Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 hurry jack hurry save them its soo good cant wait till you update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Omg! That was great! That was lovely to read! My Bday is just getting better.. lol Come on Jack, just get in there. Martha needs you! Update soon please!?!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 love it please post more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 OMG the suspense is killing me!!! Hurry Jack cause I bet Martha has made Corey even angrier now that everyone knows its him. I can't wait to see the look on Jacks face when he sees what Corey has done to Martha, yay go Jack and do the same to Corey!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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