~emma~ Posted May 18, 2006 Report Share Posted May 18, 2006 What an awesome chapter. They all need to get in there and save irene and martha before its too late!!! Can't wait for the next chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da_love_goddess Posted May 18, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2006 Another great chapter. I hope thy figure out it's Corey. Hope you update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted May 18, 2006 Report Share Posted May 18, 2006 Loving it please post more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 20, 2006 Report Share Posted May 20, 2006 Ha ha! Yay now your getting somewhere Jacky boy! Finally thet are realising it is Corey. Great chapter as usual, can't wait till you update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_jessik Posted May 20, 2006 Report Share Posted May 20, 2006 OMG Jack's the new detective in town, we don't need Peter anymore. lol Wow great update! Can't wait to read more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 20, 2006 Report Share Posted May 20, 2006 Yay go Jack!!! I knew he wasn't a good cop for nothing! I hope he goes in there and punches Coreys lights out! lol Another great update, thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 20, 2006 Report Share Posted May 20, 2006 (edited) Awww clever Jack!! lol Go on! Get in there my son!! Lol.. sorry, i don't know where that came from.. lol Great chapter! Please update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon! EDIT: OH! And I forgot to say how well you did with Alf and Colleen's dialogue! It was like it was them! Lol. It was amazing! Well done! Really sounded like them. Edited May 20, 2006 by xxNicolexx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted May 21, 2006 Report Share Posted May 21, 2006 (edited) Thanks Nicole. I had to really think about Alf and Colleen's dialogue. I wanted to make sure that it sounded just like them. I'm glad that it worked out well. Edited May 21, 2006 by bay girl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~emma~ Posted May 21, 2006 Report Share Posted May 21, 2006 Awesome chapter... YAY go Jack. Now all you have to do is get in there and save Martha!! Keep up the great work... i can't wait till the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da_love_goddess Posted May 23, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 Great chapter bay girl. Yay Jack has figured it out. I hope he rescues Martha and Irene now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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