[.jessa-belle.] Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 yES, omg omg , I cant wait , YAY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 Yey! =) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 Woo hooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to read it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Thank goodness, it has felt like ages! (When it reality it hasn't been) lol Can not wait! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Ooh very good! I really liked how you explained Corey and Martha fighting, it was so funny: He laughed at her. “Why?” he started. “There’s a name for girls like you. Girls who cheat on their boyfriends. Girls who can’t keep their legs shut,” he continued. Martha looked at him shocked. I just creased up laughing; true but harsh! Come on Alf, you go boy. Run!!! Save Martha and Irene Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Couldn't keep her legs shut. pffft. If you were around temptation like Jack then it is TOTALLY understandable. lol. Have i said that i think Corey's a total physco latley? Poor Martha, but don't worry Alf is on his way! Jack you betta get your butt down there too! Oh and that was fantastic writting. Just brilliant! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 (edited) Couldn't keep her legs shut. pffft. If you were around temptation like Jack then it is TOTALLY understandable. lol. Have i said that i think Corey's a total physco latley? Poor Martha, but don't worry Alf is on his way! Jack you betta get your butt down there too! Oh and that was fantastic writting. Just brilliant! lol I totally agree with you!!!! corey is cute but jack!! lol I wouldnt refuse and corey how wierd and nasty:@! Poor martha and irene I hope alf finds them and then gets jack and jack saves them and is the hero of the day!! go alf and jack!!! lol Neway good story I love reading this plz update soon cnt wait for next chap:) XsianX Edited May 6, 2006 by XS-I-A-NX Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 First Martha, then Irene, and now maybe Alf!? Lol. What the hell is corey going to do with all these people! Lol. Great story!! Fantastic! Funny aswell as ""-ish! Please updates as soon as you can!! Please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 If you were around temptation like Jack then it is TOTALLY understandable. Exactly!! How could you resist him?? Anyways they had the best of intentions to tell him... lol Fantastic chapter, great writing!! I am really dying to read the next chapter so please update as soon as you possibly can!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[.jessa-belle.] Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Yes i agree with all your comments , Corey is a little BEEP , and i would choose Jack over him any day Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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