elikell

Windy, cloudy and on the cooler side

Nice update. Loved the old videos touch. Very touching. Can't wait to see how you finish this up. And how Ruby will react when she sees Grant. Looking forward to more. I love this story a lot. You write the characters so well. Update soon please

Great update. Loved it. A bit of humour in there never hurt anyone! Can't wait to see where you take this. And whether Charlie will tell Ruby about Brax. Update soon please.

Loved the update. You write Rabbit and everyone else so well. Very amusing update. Can't wait to see where you take this. And how April will tell other people. Please update soon!

Wow, that was just touching. And amazing. I hope that Charlie can now get back to who she once was. With or without Brax. Very well written. Loved it. Update soon please

Cloudy and drizzly.

I agree with most of the other comments. I'm glad that Ruby read out the letter, rather than half telling a story, or having a go at her mother. And that she let everyone process things. I feel sorry for Ruby for what she must've gone through reading that letter for herself, and then out loud. It'd be something you'd never want to really read. But I'm glad Ruby put her feelings of anger aside and went with just the truth. I think it shows how mature she has become. Really sad but beautiful chapter. Please update soon.

Great update! That was so sad. No matter what happens, I hope that Charlie is okay. She needs to be okay. Please update soon

Love it. Very well written. Rabbit is very amusing. You've written her so well. Update soon please

Another amazing chapter. The description was so amazing. I feel so sorry for Charlie. She must just be so broken. And Brax too I guess. Looking forward to the next chaper. Please post soon

Sunny but quite chilly.

Great start. Can't wait to see where you take this. You have a lot of interesting ideas happening here. Update soon please

You've certainly got me intrigued as to what the letter Ruby got said. Looking forward to that being revealed. Excellent chapter. Very sad, but very well written. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Please update soon.

Another update So sad. I do hope that Charlie can overcome this. Looking forward to reading more soon

You've certainly got some mystery happening here! I am glad that Aden and Belle can have the happiness they didn't get on the show. Great writing, love it immensely

Wow, I was secretly hoping for Martha to die just because I love Charlie. That was so sad. Can't wait to see what she wrote in those letters. Poor Ruby and Angelo. Looking forward to reading how they cope. Please update soon!

Yay, another update. So heartbreaking about Charlie. I'm glad that Ruby is there for her mother. I hope she can overcome this trauma and get back to who she once was. Another update soon please. Loving it so far!

Not more drama. I just want to know who doesn't make it! I'm now a little concerned for both of them. I do hope that Charlie is okay though. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update again soon please

Yay, another update. Really well described and written. I loved it, even though the actual story was sad. I hope Charlie is okay.

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Its a bit chilly. The suns out, but the wind makes it quite cold.

Loved this immensely. Loved how Ruby was so worried. She finally cares about her mother and not herself! Great ending. Just loved it all. Well done. Great writing.

Great start. Can't wait to read who's funeral it is. I think it might be Charlie's, but I'm hoping its not! Keep writing. You have me intrigued...

Loved it as usual. I love how Miles and Rabbit interact. It'd be hard to get used to your imaginary friend suddenly becoming real. Love the humour! Continue please

This is a very awesome update. Please update again soon. Can't wait to see where you take this.