elikell

Come on Charlie, start doing your job again! You know Brax is no good, where have your instincts gone? Get back to where you belong!

You've started something very interesting here, and I can't wait to read more. I feel like this is just the beginning of so much more! Please update soon

Chocolat

Cold. Sunny, but really cold. Very windy.

Just caught up with this fic. Loved it. Rabbit is so funny. And talkative. Man she can talk! lol. Keep writing. I love the comedy in this fic.

I love Watson on the show! She's awesome. The way she does her job is so professional. I'm still waiting for her to get a promotion from Constable... And a promotion to Regular Character on the show.

Nice, I loved this. The relationship between Dex and Heath is this is awesome. The whole thing made me laugh. Well written. Very funny. Well done!

Wow, a bit shocked about Irene dying. But this was a wonderful oneshot. I'm so glad that Charlie and Brax finally told someone! Great story. Well written. Well done!

That was beautifully written! So emotional. Abortion is not something easy to write about, but I found that what you wrote was just so amazing. Well done. I was actually hoping that Ruby might've told Charlie and she rushed into the clinic to stop Ruby. I totally feel sorry for Ruby in this fic. The poor girl. Man Casey was horrible! Very well written with great emotions. Well done.

Loved it as usual. Rabbit makes me laugh. She's certainly different to anyone else!

Shawshank Redemption. I just love that movie.

Thanks to you all for your comments. I am so thankful for the time you have given to read my oneshot. I'm glad you liked it

Very lovely and definately not too short! Loved it. It was something different. Very well written. Well done

Loved it. Miles and Rabbits portrayals are very true to character and very amusing to read

I really like how different this is. Everyone can see Rabbit is a new twist. Keep writing! Love it

Very well written. Amazing details and emotions. Charlie having a social life was awesome to read. Loved it all. Well done

I loved this story a lot. Really enjoyed it. Superb writing

I love how different this story is. Lovin' it!

Wow, just amazing. I like this so much. The descriptions and emotions were so well written! Well done on writing something so amazing.

I liked this one-shot a lot. Very well written and presented. I agree. H&A really missed an opportunity with Ruby. But I guess there's still time for that... Love Dex's mannerisms and characterisation. So like him to make lists! lol. Well done

Great start! Keep writing. And if you want someone to proof-read your work before you post it, just let me know (either PM or email and we'll go from there!)

Only just found this. And I LOVE it Great one shot. Well done.

Couldn't have said it better myself!!

Love Charlie. I wish she had more screentime with Ruby more. I used to enjoy their time together and I hope the writers will come back and address this new development of mother and daughter and get them to spend more time together. Love Charlie's complex-ness. I just don't like her with Angelo... More screen time for Esther would be great!