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Loved it. The interaction between the characters was amazing. I do hope that Cheryl gets whats coming to her! She's crazy. Please update soon. I can't wait to see where you take this!

Loved Ruby. I'm glad that she was excited about the wedding, but I was happy when Brax talked to her. It's like they're one big happy family. at the ending. I just hope that Charlie is ready for all that is coming her way. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please

Another wonderful update. I'm glad that Ruby and Casey are happy for Charlie and Brax. That was a very sweet chapter. Loved Ruby's reaction Your writing is incredible. Please update soon

Another fantastic update. I'm really liking the story you're creating for the Braxtons. It's really beautiful and very well written. Please update soon

The Boy In The Striped Pyjamas Not what I was expecting at the end!!

Sunny but cold.

Not Alf! I hope he'll be okay. Loved the baby bounce comment. Too funny. Very nice chapter. Can't wait to see where you take it. Please update soon.

Wow, Ruby, so not tactful at all! I do hope that Charlie is okay and doesn't try to run away or anything. And I hope that Ruby can move past this too. I think they both deserve fresh starts. I can't wait to see where you take this. You have created something really unique here. Please update soon!

Wow, I'm loving this so far. I'm glad that Brax is looking out for his brothers because I don't think Cheryl can, even if she wanted too! Great start. Your writing is just amazing. Looking forward to more. Please update soon

Aww, he proposed! I must admit, I was glad it was Brax outside and not some crazy person! I'm very much enjoying this fic. Please update soon.

Looks like its gonna come up stormy. Cloudy, overcast and windy. Not at all pleasant

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I'm really hoping that its Brax outside and not some crazy psycho! Loved the falling into the house when Ruby opened the door. Very amusing I'm glad you're bringing bits of Charlie from the show into your fic (with the commitment stuff). Can't wait to see where you take this next. Please update soon

Sunny but cold

Another amazing chapter. I love this so much. I hope that no matter what happens, Brax doesn't hurt Charlie. The emotions were amazing and very well written. I can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please

I hope that Brax continues to comfort Charlie. He seemed really nice in that chapter. I wonder what Ruby will do when she finds out about Charlie. And I hope Charlie can at least look at Ruby! Nice chapter. I love the characters you've incorporated into it and how they interact together. Its very nice. Please update soon. I can't wait to see where you take this!

Cloudy and chilly

Sunny and warm in the direct sunlight, but with the wind its a tad chilly!

Oh no, I feel so sorry for Ruby. Finding out she was adopted would be hard enough, without finding out about Charlie. Poor girl must be going through hell. I'm glad that the other girls are going to keep Charlie's secret for now. I think Charlie should be able to tell everyone when (and if) she's ready. Looking forward to seeing what happens when Charlie and Ruby see each other again, now that Charlie knows who Ruby is... Please update soon. And in answer to your question, I'm not fussed how you write in terms of length. I'm happy to read either way. The way you have it now is nice though!

I'm glad that Watson is doing her job, but I hope that Charlie can overcome all the issues with Brax possibly going to jail for a long time and move on with her life. Oh Angelo, was there not a better way to do that? I guess we'll wait and see what happens next. Looking forward to another update soon please

Rabbit is just too funny sometimes! Great chapter. I'm glad that Gina and Bianca are on board with the idea of Xavier and April having a baby. I love this story and can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please

Oh wow, he was going to propose. Very nice. Pity Watson ruined it. I am interested to see what dirt Angelo has on Brax that he's given to Watson. I loved this chapter a lot. Very well written. Please update soon. You have me in suspense now!!

Nice and warm in the sun, but still cold. I hate winter sometimes!

You're very welcome pembie. Your writing has improved greatly, and I am loving where you continue to take this. I can't wait to see what happens next. Looking forward to more.

Man Cheryl is a bit of a nutcase. I get why she might be angry or upset or something, but to do that is just crazy. Poor Charlie having to deal with those photos. It'd be hard enough to get over without someone showing you photos of what you were trying to forget! I do feel like Angelo and Watson are certainly not going to make life easy for Charlie. I just hope Charlie can make up her own mind about what she wants done before someone makes it up for her. I hope Charlie gets a break soon. She deserves one! Great update. Loved it a lot. Update again soon please