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Heath and Liam in a punch-up over Bianca, very nice. Amusing that Liam hurt himself more than Heath! I do hope that Charlie comes clean to Brax about what's going on with her. Loving this immensely. Can't wait to see where you take it. Please update soon

Oh wow, wondering how Heath will react to that! As long as he doesn't catch them red-handed he might be okay...but not likely. I'm glad that Teagan got her feelings out there. And the tattoo appearing, nice Loving this story and how its written. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please

Loved that chapter. Brax leading Charlie blindfolded A wonderful date between the two of them. Looking forward to the next 14...lol. Very interesting preview. Update soon

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Cold and windy. Hoping for some sunshine later

Cloudy, cold and windy

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Another great chapter! Love the cuteness of Teagan. And the boys finding a place for their illegal activities...Very interesting. I'm glad that they're helping with the household payments and things. Cheryl seems completely oblivious to any wrong-doing. Can't wait to see how the characters develop. Update soon please

Oh wow. I'm gonna have the same reaction as everyone else. Is Charlie pregnant too?!? I'm hoping that Liam can forgive Bianca for what she did, but she needs him now and I hope he's there for her. No matter what. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please

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Cold. But sunny

Loved it, as usual! Ruby was just too funny here. She's certainly changed since the start of this fic. All her comments were classic. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please

Cold and wet.

Incredible first chapter. Can't wait to see where you take it! Interesting idea. Wondering what Bianca is going to do now... Please update soon. You have me intrigued.

Another wonderful update. You've written everyone so well and I love it. You've certainly created something different here! Love the brotherly bond between all three of them, but especially Brax and little Casey, who is just so cute! Update soon please

Watson was back on screen in last nights episode. She seems to appear for the big stuff, and then just disappears from the station...

I think Casey needs more character depth, which we will get to eventually I'm sure. He's certainly different to his brothers in a lot of ways. Hopefully we'll see more of Casey and get into the deeper stuff soon!

I'm not so sure I would be a fan of that storyline if it ever occurred! Yeah, me too. But what else could she have meant?? I agree. They certainly skipped a few lines in there somewhere... And I hope that they come back to it at some stage. My thought too was she was pregnant, but then nothing else was said about it. Really frustrates me sometimes when Home and Away does that.

Terrible! Really cloudy and cold. And windy!

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I, like pembie, read the title and thought I was going crazy with the familiarity of the title. But I liked this version just as much as the other one. Your characterisation of Dex is classic. I love how he thinks. He's a very amusing character to read. I loved the story, and the writing. You're certainly talented Well done. Loved this immensely.

Nice update. Love Heath wanting to help, even though it was illegal! lol. Little Casey is too cute. And his innocence is a nice touch to the story. Love this. Can't wait to see where you take it. Update soon please

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