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Brax 85 Charlie 50

I'm suprised because usually I thought Australia is quite hot. I'm not saying that Australia doesn't have wind or the cold weather. I wouldn't know because I've never been to Australia. What do you think is the highest and lowest temperature in Australia. I know the lowest where I live has been between -10 to -15 degrees and I think the highest is in the 20 to 30 degrees mark. It's winter at the moment in Australia, which is why its so cold. In summer it can get up to 40 or more. But in winter sometimes we struggle to even get above 10, which is cold here. Today its sunny, but its still not hot as such.

Sunny, but chilly. The wind really messes with the suns potential. I'd almost kill for some 30 degree weather right now...

I've only just found this, and wow! That was extremely well written! The emotions, the thoughts, the everything. Just amazing. You're an incredible writer. Don't let anyone else tell you different. You've certainly got a talent here. Don't ever give that up. Just a beautiful oneshot. Amazing. Thats all I can say. Really amazing.

Great chapter. Felt so sorry for Charlie. Man that would be embarrassing! I see that Brax's mum certainly has a problem with Charlie. I do hope that they overcome their differences though, for Brax's sake. Can't wait to see where you take this Update soon please

Great update. Loved it immensely. I felt so sorry for Charlie. You wrote her pain and anguish so well. It was just beautiful. Lovely chapter. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please

Great update. I feel so sorry for Charlie. I can sense that the whole town will find out fairly soon about Charlie being Ruby's mother. Poor Charlie. She moved to a small town to start fresh, and its like she's been taken right back to the start again. Loved Martha's reaction as soon as Charlie was out of earshot, and how she automatically wanted to talk about it. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please

It looks sunny at the moment, but who knows what'll happen? Its a little windy, but nothing too major. Hopefully it'll be a nice calm winter day.

Loved this. Very interesting. It was a much nicer way for Bianca and Heath to meet. Loved it all immesnsely, the dialogue, the emotions, the descriptions. Well done

I didn't expect Charlie to be revealed as Ruby's mother this early in the story, but I'm loving it. I can't wait to see how not only Charlie reacts, but Ruby as well. Plus all the other people in Summer Bay too. It was a bit mean of Laura to just tell everyone about Charlie, but wow. Nice way to introduce everyone and bring everyone together. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Please update soon xx

Believe it or not, its actually sunny today. Still a little chilly, but I can see the sun. Almost doesn't feel like winter. Almost...

After all this time you've finally gotten Charlie and Brax to tell Ruby and Casey about their relationship. Yay for that I get the distinct feeling that Cheryl might not be as mentally stable as she should be... And I hope she doesn't do anything to hurt Charlie, Ruby or either of the Braxes! Another great update. Please continue posting when you can

I thought that was really nice. Charlie's emotions for Brax were just incredibly well written. And I love the fact that she had children with Brax, and would never have any with David. I loved this oneshot very much. It was incredibly well written and the emotions were spot on. Loved how protective Harry was of Charlie. Well done on a beautifully written fic.

Ooooh, I do like this fic already! The way you've portrayed Charlie is amazing and very well written. I'm loving it. I especially like the bit about Charlie telling herself that she was going to get asked a lot about new to the bay, because that is exactly what it would be like in a small town (having come from a small town, I do know this for a fact!). So well done on that. Update soon please. I'm very interested to see where you take this and how it all comes together.

Another wonderful update. Love the Brax in this fic. I can see him being so kind here. It's nice to read. An amazing chapter. Your writing is incredible Update soon please

Sunny but a little cloudy. Chilly.

Great update. I just love Rabbit. She's so unique. I'm glad Xavier was happy about the baby. I wasn't sure he would be... I'm loving this story and the way you tell it. Update soon please

Great update. I'm so glad that Brax is taking care of Charlie. I just hope he doesn't do the wrong thing by her. Not again. Loved Colleens rant. Especially, "she has been a few fries short of a happy meal lately". That seriously made me laugh out loud. Don't know why. Maybe just my crazy sense of humour! lol. I'm totally loving this story. Update soon please

I agree wholeheartedly with all the other comments. Amazing ending for an amazing story. I was a bit apprehensive at first with you killing Charlie, but it was a very good story. And you told it very well. I look forward to more stories from you in the future Well done

Cold. A little windy. There was a ray of sunlight before, but that's long gone!

Great update as usual. I do hope that Charlie can overcome her injuries and return to the woman she once was. I have a bad feeling that Sid is about to deliver another blow that'll not help Charlie at all! Can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon!

Wow, she kissed him. Interesting to see where you take this. Who will she pick? Please update soon.

The wind has finally died down a little. But still cold and a little windy.

Nice bit of comedy there at the start. I think Charlie setting Leah's hair on fire was absolutely hilarious! Its good to see Charlie and Brax beginning to talk again after everything that has happened. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Update soon please

Interesting. Can't wait to see how you end this. I hope Ruby and Angelo get what they need to move on with their lives. Please update soon!