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On ‎18‎/‎05‎/‎2020 at 12:30, Kristen said:

Sally and Shannon so cute 

Shane and Shannon oh and Shannon staying the night.

Glad you liked it.

 

On ‎18‎/‎05‎/‎2020 at 19:28, chair said:

You've captured the characters perfectly here. 

 

On ‎20‎/‎05‎/‎2020 at 05:41, Sunny Girl said:

As always, you capture the essence of the characters really well and it makes such a difference to the flow and the quality of the story.

Thanks, both of you! I do always try, especially when writing something people are going to read like this, to make the sure the characters' voices sound right.

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Good stuff, Red.

This alternate 1996verse is a joy to read. Sal and Curtis do make a good couple, I imagine he would be super-caring towards her and she'd definitely be a rock when he has deal with his diabetic stuff.

Well, no man among us could blame Shane. Shannon was one best looking girls at the time.

It's not too far of what could have gone down on screen.

 

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On ‎22‎/‎05‎/‎2020 at 18:32, CaptainHulk said:

This alternate 1996verse is a joy to read. Sal and Curtis do make a good couple, I imagine he would be super-caring towards her and she'd definitely be a rock when he has deal with his diabetic stuff.

Well, no man among us could blame Shane. Shannon was one best looking girls at the time.

Thanks, CaptainHulk! The whole thing started from that point of "What if Angel had died instead and something had happened between Shane and Shannon?", and I decided to throw Sally/Curtis into the mix as well to differentiate it further from what happened on screen.

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Holy s***, I can't believe that worked so fast!

Either way, cheers.👏

Sal would naturally detect Shannon not being home on account of sharing a room.

The Angel thing seems cold-hearted but most likely what Shannon would be saying.

The Michael/Shane dialogue is believable.

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Great chapter

Pippa having a  chat with Shannon

Sally offering to talk with Shannon

Michael chatting to Shane

I look forward to more

Update again soon   :)

 

 

 

 

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On ‎25‎/‎05‎/‎2020 at 17:39, CaptainHulk said:

The Angel thing seems cold-hearted but most likely what Shannon would be saying.

I guess it could be seen that way but Shannon was feeling a bit fed up at being judged.

 

On ‎25‎/‎05‎/‎2020 at 20:00, chair said:

You've captured the characters perfectly.  I look forward to reading more.

Thank you, I try!

 

On ‎26‎/‎05‎/‎2020 at 00:21, Kristen said:

Pippa having a  chat with Shannon

Sally offering to talk with Shannon

Michael chatting to Shane

Yep, that happened.

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